This is really good so far. I like the way you word things, your sentences have a very nice flow to them, which gives a very nice effect. I also like the way you write the times. These are placed very nicely, and add to the good effect that you get with the flow of your sentences. I'd like to read more, I hope you post a new chapter.

Great fic.

OOh,OOh! Please continue! I love "You've Got Mail!" Please update soon! ^_~

OMG ... this fic ROX ... so much detail ... you have fantastic talents! Anyways ... plz update soon! Koumi ... rite?! Wellz ... ayways ... Koumi 4eva! ^^"

Best. Story. Ever. What makes it even better is that it isn't even finished yet. Yup. Best. Story. Ever. (Friend in background): "Way to fill up space."