I know this story is complete but I hope the baby is a boy...then with the events of Terra prime that they also get the girl.

When you write the sequel, I suspect you'll find the Tuckers and the rest of Earth are less willing to accept the newest Tuckers than Trip hopes. Although his nephew's class might be intrigued. I shared the suspicion over what's-her-face, and liked Trip's answer to T'Pol's use of a human phrase. This was a well-written journey, and I look forward to reading the sequel - if you chose to write it.

What a lovely story. Beautifully written, with great characterization. I'm glad the TV show went with more of a shoot 'em up science fiction epic when it came to the Xindi, but I really enjoyed this version too.

I love the blend of conflict, friendship and comedy.

I love this story, it is so awsome! I understand if you are really busy (life happens to the best of us), but I would love a sequel, as this is one of the best written stories I've read that have a T'pol and Trip romance focus. Please!

Wow. Just wow.

I don't know if I can properly explain all my feelings for this story in a single review, but I was lazy earlier and didn't review.

I picked up this story just a few hours ago (5) and have been reading it off and on since then. It reads like a great movie of Enterprise (which we'll never get, sadly). I love that T'Pol and Trip ended up together, with T'Mir and Charles the fourth. I hated that he died in the series, it didn't seem to fit in at all with the rest of the show. It was too abrupt and not as well thought out as the rest of the Star Trek legacy.

Although I thoroughly dislike Soval knw (take that Mr. S), I really enjoyed reading your characters, they stayed true to the original base characters while still allowing them to grow.

I was saddened when I didn't see the sequel you promised on your profile page. But I understand if you lost the motivation for it.

Great story.

That was awesome!! Can't wait for the sequel!

So good. So adictive too! How do you come up with stories like the cultural addition? It was great! Keep up the good work(stories)!

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very spooky to me... i always thought aliens looked freaky... especially Andorians... but good job, overall.

It is an awesome story...I love it...

Applause, Bravo. All warm and fuzzy inside. Thanks for the thanks. I enjoyed reading this story from the beginning. You have a great knack for characters. This is also the first story I've started of yours that actually has been finished. Congrats, its a big step to future stories.

Keep up the good work. Its magic time.

Just when you think its over, more action. Violence, suspense, racism, romance, family, ex's, its got everything

Its nice to see some action on Vulcan for a change. Great wrap up scene. Very Star Wars-ish in celebrating at the end. Good work.