it would have been good if the same was in the manga :)

good work

Amazing fic. It really was a great read!

The dynamic between these two is just great.

This is so touching! Love it man!

The yaoi part was the best! XD

OMG! this is just so good.. i enjoy this so much.. i can almost picture everything in my mind, so sorta like watching a movie.. haha.. thank you so much for writing this..

"i won't let go" aah! i loved this. oh not to mention in the bath too! um. hot and sweet._!

That was awesome! Really cute. Wow.

aaw this story is so cute and sweet! you write good WA/EC fics, keep up the good job! XD

Uwaa that was great perfect characterization and interaction! _ Good job!

Nyaa, that was great! I loved it.

wai! genious *-*
:3

i just can't help spreading the Kubotoki love around! lovely story! :)

Amazing and poignant. I swear, you have the magic touch when it comes to this fic-business. Both of them never deviating from the personalities Minekura drew for them and also with the same...how do I say it...there-but-not-too-explicity-shown intimacy between the two of them. Always tactfully executed while remaining well away from the field of "trashy romance." Nice job, as usual. _

T_T So... ::sigh:: beautiful interaction; I love these characters, just can't get enough of them, ever ever ever. _ You portray them so wonderfully! And so many circumstances they can get into... _ I like this one a lot. ;_; Poor Tokitoh. *_* Yay for Kubota! XD Yay! on general principles! Great storytelling; you present the characters absitively posolutely great! :D ::mumbles:: wunnerful, wunnerful...

Beautiful, Timmonsgray. I loved it, just like all your other fics- but this one was particularly nice. .