Great story!

aw... for two reasons: one, the story's over (tear) and two, it was so cute! i love your story!

It is now officially added to my C2 group, Frodomances, because i just love FrodoOC stories and I'm like you - there's so many FrodoSam slash stories that it's nice to see a change. And thank you for continuing on with your story! Most of the FrodoOC stories that I've read never end - the author just gave up on them. I'm so glad i got to read your happy ending!

And i'm so glad that Frodo stayed in the Shire - i would have definitely cried if he didn't!

All in all, I totally love your story and I wish I could tell you some more about it... ack, i can't think of anything right now. The only thing i noticed were a few spelling and grammar errors, as well as some tenses changing. but all that could be fixed if you had a beta reader. Are you interested in editing this story? Like going back and correcting all those errors?

If you are, i'd love to help you!

I can't wait to hear from you!
~Eleanor

hehe, romance.. sorry..chocolate overload.

This is a beautiful story; very well written. I loved it from the beginning all the way to the end. Cahpter 20 scared me a bit- I thought Frodo was actually going to leave Miranda! But I'm so glad they have a happy ending, I'm a sucker for happy, romantic endings!

Yay! Frodo got a gal! Am I invited to the wedding? :)

Raven

so beautiful! i loved this story, through the whole thing! there were parts i was scared and didn't know what would happen next, but i am so happy to see frodo happy. i loved this story. i hope you write more LotR stories like this one.

A beautiful end for a beautiful story. Often I feared it would be sad... because it seems that Frodo is a character bond to unhappyness. Well, I'm glad I was afraid for nothing.
Please, give us another story like this!

Yay!! That was so kawaii and stuff :-) The whole thing was great, good job, d00d!

WHOOHOO!! GO MERANDA!! lucky litte... never mind. She gets to sleep with Frodo!! grr... Rather me then you, but your the main character in the story so you desereve it. now, i will come back toreality.
I willt ry and read your Van helsing Story sine I loved the movie but if i dont, remeind me cause i'm gonig to be busy the next 3 weeks.
keep writing BYE!!

Good job. Glad you're still having Frodo and Sam leave for Valinor. And it's Saruman, not Sarumon. But I know you've read the books. This fic was somehow different from the other trash on this site. *cough*Dove of Peace*cough* I am glad to see people respecting Tolkien's works and writing well at the same time. Very nice.

oh good. i'm glad you changed the rating, and i am also glad you didn't put more intimate stuff in there until they are married. now wouldn't it be just swell if they get married in minas tirith? i would like that. oh, and by teh way, PG is fine for a rating.

Aw! So absolutely adorable! I cried! It was awful; the whole of the internet cafe was looking at me weirdly! So embarrassing! Please, please update soon!
Luv
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I CAN SEE IT ALL NOW!! Frodo wants to get married to meranda under the tree in Minas tirith. it would be so perfect!! more perfect then aragorns and arwens.
oh, and get in bed together huh? WHats going to HAPPEN!? * Ahem* Sorry. perverted teenage mind going overboard again. LOKL.
PLEASE UPDATE! AND HAPPY LOTR RELEASE 3 RELEASE DAY!!

Lovely chapter! so sweet, and I'm glad Frodo is taking a stand on saving a more intimate relationship until marriage. i would prefer that they didn't sleep in the same bed until then, but they probably don't consider that, as most people don't. *sigh* I'm so glad to see an update! I wish that you could update sooner, but I'm glad that you do at all.
I'm starting to worry more and more about this PG-13 to R rating. I haven't seen anything yet that merits that rating, and I'm beginning to think this story is far from over...they're not going to die are they? you're not going to take this lovely chapter and turn the story around in a completely different direction? Nothing bad is going to happen in Gondor, right? oh please don't do that...see, things are too happy right now for Frodo, poor old Frodo, he just never gets happy endings.

aww *squishy happy face* sweet ending. Perhaps a bit sappy - but I like that. Good job.