That was quite a long stretch of reading. Putting it into chapters would have been easier, but it was worth the strain on the eyes! I especially enjoyed Roxton and Marguerite's bantering. It was so like them. Great job!

Great Story!

Oh wow...this is really great! I love how M is so concerned about R but doesn't want the other to know...still, she can't hide it, and I love how they're all so shocked to see she really cares for R...

Oooh I love how M grabs R's hand at the end, her concern plain on her face...ooh and that scene where M is watching him at night...nice nice job!

Well...while that story didn't exactly satisfy the rabid M/Rer in me, it did fit with their early personas. If M had fallen all over R, it would have just seemed out of place. So...I congratulate you on keeping their actions toned down, even as their thoughts (or whispered words to an unconscious man) were waaay ahead. Nice job.

Also...Veronica thinking about the whole barbarism thing was nicely done.

That was such a good story very well written brilliant to say the least well done.x

Another well-done story. You write so clearly and your stories are so detailed, hitting every character right on the mark. Good job!

It was really action packed and true to the series. You've got real talent. Thanks for the great story.

As always an entertaining story. Starting off with the scientific angle was perfect, however, the cave and raptor scene were so well executed (and the images stayed in my mind) that I jumped when someone walked up behind me while I was reading this episode. I called them episodes, because during this time between reruns and new episodes, you have filled a breech in the creative vortex. Please continue to write...!

This story is wonderful. I felt like I was watching an actual episode of the show. I loved the moments between Roxton and Marguerite. The plot was well thought out, interesting, and original. Great Job.

Starlight

that was great i loved it u r a very talnted writer - i cant wait till your next story

Great story, I loved the M&R interactions, you've got them pegged dead on.

And the story was great too, you've taken the cat&mouse love of R&M and put it into a great storyline, loved the story, and it kept my attention all the way. Waiting for more (

Oh wow, that was really really good! GREAT job! :)

Great I loved it, very well written. Great job:)

That was one of the greatest stories ever writen on this site. Beautiful job! Keep them commin.

This story should be the basis for TV episode of this program.

I loved this story! It was beautifully written. I love how you had Roxton be the one who needed to be saved for a change(that was close I don't know what I'd do without him). I also love the way you showed how Marg. showed her feelings about Roxton. And how Ned And Veronica were so mad about what was happening to Roxton that they almost became BARBARIANES them selves. This is an absolutly wonderful story. I do hope you keep writing your stories.

Riss