great story

well, well, well,... look at zach! he luvs someone! this is a shock! pretty kewl story

(3: *kisses*

Very cool stary! I love this kind of stuff! ) Keep it up! -LadyCallie

Such unusual names you picked, I'm intrigued. I like your story, but I have one complaint, they're so short! Write more for each chapter please, so we can enjoy it even more. Thanks.

eh? tooo short

Awwww,that's sooo sweet to see zack's soft side. Interesting that he finally has a kid. it's cute.

cute-I love your little quote, too!

cute.. liked your end quote too :)

hey cassie.. i just love your Kairos character :) i liked that story/thoughts too

Aaawww! :) That makes me happy.

Awesome! :)

That was good, I loved the quote at the end, I'm gonna do just that! I'm enjoying all these things with Kai, and Doni and Ubi, and Lexi, and of course now Mari.

that was sweet. I love your future fics. They are really unique and I thiink that they are cute. Now its a school night and if I don't go to bed soon my algebra teacher will have a fit!

I really liked this. This is the first fanfic I've read that looks this far into the future. It's really nice to imagine Logan and Max married and with children. Hope to see more stories by you.

Interesting. It was kinda hard to get but it was good