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Hell-of-Fire 2006-03-20 ch 9,	abuseI really like this story! My fav parts were Lee 'feeding' Kara at the dance, the part where he dragged her to the dance floor and danced with her and the whole part of them being together, with pillow fight and everything. The Sharon/Chief story line was great too You did a good job!
gnomesbeatfaeries 2005-10-17 ch 1,	abusethat was great! but just to let you know, the last chapter is repeated. it says 'the end' then had the whole chapter over again. michelle
gnomesbeatfaeries 2005-10-17 ch 9,	abusethat was great, but just to let you know, the last chapter is repeated. It says 'the end' and then it has the chapter all over again. just take a look at that. michelle
Kou Shun'u 2005-03-06 ch 9,	abusejust to inform you this chapter repeats twice over. otherwise it was rather nice having the rest of the squadron at least trying to make an effort. its rather unfortunate that this particular fic ends here since id like to see how those realonships blossom. thanks.
tmelange 2005-02-12 ch 9,	abuseExcellent. Kudos.
amarie5 2004-03-09 ch 9,	abuseI love the way you write your story about BSG I really believe it could have happen this way in a sequel.So Keep writing and I'll keep reading it. P.S. sorry for my English, I'm French Canadian From Montréal
Shannon Vega 2004-01-23 ch 9,	abuseWow. I loved it. Thank you for fixing the whole regs thing between Sharon and Tyrol. And for Kara and Lee. Again, wow.
Melodramatic 2004-01-22 ch 9,	abuseAs someone who has only seen the recent mini-series, I think this was really well done. It gave me more insight into the dynamics of the relationships between these people and was a very interesting read. Looking forward to more. :)
PadawanMage 2004-01-18 ch 9,	abuseThis read better when I got the feeling that Lee and Kara were just becoming better friends. * hey, at least Lee is loosening up! ;-) * Why is chapter 9 repeated after the end of the same chapter?
PadawanMage 2004-01-18 ch 8,	abuseIt was good that Adama was the one to explain to Kara about how people should move on.. * I'm also glad he gently rebuked her about the attitude she carries when Colonel Tigh's name is mentioned. Maybe she needs to move on in more ways than one? * If Kara had such a hard time with relationships, then what was about Zac that attracted her to him?
lovewildfire 2004-01-16 ch 9,	abuseI liked how you showed how comfortable Lee and Kara are sleeping next to each other. It was interesting to see how Kara dealt with the people didn't like her spending time with Lee.
Kathy_SFF 2004-01-16 ch 9, anon.	abuseSorry I could not review this sooner. All I can say is WOW!! I think you do a great job with keeping true to the original characters, while giving them an added dimension. Some of my favorite parts are as follows: The dance between Commander Adama and Starbuck. It was very well written. I could see it taking place. You really convayed her respect (and admiration) for him (not anyone could tell Starbuck to lay off Tigh without an argument), and his affection and respect for her (I would have to guess that when he saw her alone after dancing with Lee he wanted to distract her a bit). Lee asking fellow pilot why no one is dancing with Starbuck. WOW. I really think you got Kara nailed down. She is friendly yet lets no one get too close. I loved how you brought that across. Lee dancing with Kara. The whole thing about Lee getting Kara a private room and then sharing it. While I am not sure where you are going to take the Lee/Kara thing, these last few chapters really brought out how deep their friendsip is and how comfortable they are with eachother. I really liked how you used Zac as a tie between them. Tyrol (sp) and Sharon relationship. You did a great job with their characters and how they deal with their relationship . I almost wish I did not see the movie's end where Sharon is a Cylon. I could go on and on but will stop here. I hope you continue to write and look forward to the next story.
History 2004-01-16 ch 9, anon.	abuseThis is an excellent story. Your character development is really storng. I enjoyed how you explored the relationship between Kara and Lee. I definitely think you should consider a sequel to this story. Think about it! Great job.
Grace O'Malley 2004-01-16 ch 9,	abuseThanks for sharing this enjoyable story, Chrys! IMO, this is a more mature and thoughtful Starbuck than the talented but impulsive girl we saw in the mini--still, I believed in her. Makes sense that she'd grow up a bit considering what they've all been through. I could see this woman getting involved with Apollo. Indeed. I think you're being awfully tough on the poor boy. All that cuddling and no action ;-> But I think my favorite part of "The Dance" was Kara's dance with Commander Adama. Great stuff! Looking forward to more from you. Grace
recollect me darling 2004-01-16 ch 9,	abuseNicely done. I like how you deal with their tricky dynamic. I think you copied-and-pasted twice, though? Please write more.

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