hehe. smiles i have no problem with your fic an as for any advice just asum i am blissfully anaware of the meaning of the word. skips off singing

This one is for Kevin Bays:
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In Takahashi land and many other anime/manga, when acharacter sneezes for no reason it means that they are being talked about. So unless Adyen is REALLY messing with our heads, the "mystery" has been answered by Akane's nose-trumpeting.

Damn! I was sure it was Ryouga!
(Now I lapse into thoughts of the likely reaction of Ranma when he discovers that Akane is a reincarnated BOY. *Gina Diggers: Do you hear laughter?*)

Setsuna happy? This would be the first fanfic that I've seen that happen in. Usually she's pulling her hair out...
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Setsuna had saw that
-this would work better with "seen" rather then "saw"
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Frankly, the possibilities are daunting
-replace "are" with "were". Are is not the correct tense for this sentance.
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depending on what he like or was fit to be.
-Now this sentance is confusing and I'm afraid it is because there is at least one or two words missing. Try this:
"depending on what he was like or was fit to be."
it reads a bit easier, but I'm not sure if it says what you intended or not.
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And another good chapter. A bit too much mystery at the end... If I was to go with the cliche, I'd say the man in the white crystal armor was none other then... Ranma... but you said you'd avoid cliches so that means it could be Genma or Ryoga or Soun... but this is one time I'm voting for the cliche answer. Don't let me down... please!
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Have a great day!

Not a bad start... Of course, if this is what you consider confusing, it's no wonder your mind was blown when you read "Odango Atama"... I kid...
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The title just has me thinking "About now some orcs are going to come crashing through that door any minute now..."
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I'll keep reading, you keep writing. Have a great day!

I have a problem with this chapter, namely in the implication that Akane isn't evil :p
Also, it's "Nerima", not "Nermia". Just a heads up.
Death to those who hate ham!