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The GothyFaery 2006-05-10 . chapter 3
This is a great story and I can't wait to finish it!! I didn't see anyone answered your question in this chapter so I will! You better make thier sex sceen that detaled. If you didn't go change it now!!
CaptainMarySparrow 2004-11-23 . chapter 11
oh well i thought that was comin' at me!
lol
anyway nice story if only you would finish it!
i think that jack comes in the tavern and lives there for a while then the dream just keeps prying at her mind (akiva's) and then jakc falls in love and struggles to find the voice to ask her to marry him and yada yada yada and then connor is like possesd and jack saves her blah blah blah and so on and so forth
i thought that would happen but as i can read you have not posted for what seems like and age!
anyway great story i shall be reading something else of yours right now
ta
Captain Mary Sparrow to ye mate...savvy?
Qhgurl 2004-04-01 . chapter 11
O.o Oh no! That makes me sad! Ok well keep in touch!
CrazyCanoeingGIT 2004-04-01 . chapter 11
Is this an april fools joke or no? because if it isn't...that's not very nice...and if it is...that's not very nice either. this story is good, don't end it! gr...
CrazyCanoeingGIT
QHGurl 2004-03-27 . chapter 1
~Sigh~ I hope you can update soon cuz there's nothing really good to read!!
BlueTrinity 2004-03-11 . chapter 10
exelent chapter,
I'm paitently awating the next.
I wud have reviewed sooner but There was a tinny acident, so just to let you know that I'm still here and wanting another chapter, Savvy/
Mystic-Rain-444 2004-03-08 . chapter 10
So it was all a dream, or, a premonition? And now she has catlike abilties becasue Conner gave her that cat? Okay, kind-of weird, but kind-of cool. You basically saved her from a horrible experience without making her a damsel in distresws. Sweet! I can't wait to read what comes next! Don't wait so long before updating again, not that I should be one to talk. I just updated POTC today! It's been like, three weeks! Anyway, luv the story, update soon!
Bvixen 2004-03-06 . chapter 10
This is a great story, keep going and please update soon
Maugre7 2004-03-06 . chapter 10
I thought the thing at the end if the last chapter was actually happening then. I was surprised when it turned out to be a dream.
QHGurl 2004-03-05 . chapter 10
(To lazy to sign in!!) What! OMFG This is really scary! Is Jack going to stop sailing?? That would be so sad!! Well sort of! LOL Really good chapter! I like how she's getting cat like abilities!!
One Feather 2004-03-05 . chapter 10
Oh! I was so excited to see what happened in the next chapter, and was so sad when I realised that there wasn't another chapter! Please keep updating! Ahh gotta love those late nights!
Also, thank you for reviewing my story. I was beginning to fear nobody would.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Willow_Sparrow589 2004-03-04 . chapter 10
MORE MORE MORE
I read multiple Jack Sparrow... Captain Jack Sparrow ... Pardon me
this is one of the bes ti have read (and ive read ALOT)
BUt please more ! thank you
DragonRider258 2004-02-29 . chapter 9
Damnit. No Cliffhangers. It's just not cool, I mean, here I am getting into the story and waiting for the sexy Jack scenes, then you cut off. That's just not allowed. I just might have to send my sexy squad of Duck Minions on you.^^
DragonRider258 2004-02-29 . chapter 6
I love it so far. I wish you would write more. I'm so uber hyper right now, I'm scared to leave much more of a review but it was wonderful so far, love.
-Karly-
CrazyCanoeingGIT 2004-02-25 . chapter 9
Great chapter! I really liked it! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what happens next!
~CrazyCanoeinggIT
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