I saw that movie and that was the only scene I couldn't watch. anyways, this was good ... and creepy

OMG! I love this!! this is so haunting, beautiful and very moving! Very well-written! it really expresses Richard Morgan's thoughts very well. actually, his death scene was one of the scenes that really hit me when i watched taht movie. man, i dreamt about it two days in a row *shudder*. i also feel so bad for him, since he really didn't do anything wrong. he was the victim, and he died in such a gruesome way :(. poor richard :(

Your ring poems are great

As a big fan of the character of Richard Morgan, I *really* love this. You did a great job with his internal thoughts - very film-like! Bravo!

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i like it but. its sounds sorta dweird

Yay! You've updated! (me too) This is really good! It really gets inside his head and explains his character more!

I wonder how he could have lived in that house all alone for so many years? Wasn't he afraid, living right next to the barn where he'd kept his daughter? Didn't he ever wonder... 'maybe this house is haunted?'

Just like I promised in ur other. This one was cool also. Later. ^_^Ja ne!

Too lazy to sign in -_-;; This was great! Truly ^_^;; I don't know what else to say.. ;)

Tha wuz coo

Hey, my dad sounds just like that...wait, that's not a good thing...LOL

Whoa! That answers my question. He really *did* have problems! Great fanfic! Keep it up!