i thounght this story was kinda confusing but, it was an ok story

cool!

its great!Keep up the good work!

This story's good. Hope your next chapter explains how rose got in there and how she is the key to defeat the invaders.

"At least she doesn’t wear her glasses anymore. I suppose you can consider that good."

There is no way on this earth that Ayane ditching her glasses can ever be good.

Good story I liked it it captured gate keepers how it should be i want to see more lol i am curious to hear more about ayanes gate of wind.

Spirit Alleron

Good story I liked it it captured gate keepers how it should be i want to see more lol i am curious to hear more about ayanes gate of wind.

Spirit Alleron

hey shadow

how long is it going to take you to update. writers block\ can't possible be taking you this long. your story is very interesting i would like to know what happens ppleeaassee!

Hey this is great!I love Gatekeepers 21 and I even have the DVD,keep them coming!

Travis

'What with Ayane? What is the place which Ayane didn't want to go? A refusal to return... Now, that's odd... What exactly is Reiji doing with the old relic from his time? I cannot figure out anything...'

I think you should have at least 2 reviews by now. Dude, do as you like. However, don't stop writing. I want to find out what's going on... Thjis is way too disturbing for you to stop reading, man... Update sooN!

Keep going!

I want to know what happened..

No one seems to be writting GK21 anymore so it's nice when someone updates.

I love the way you change characters and their thoughts. Even when you change to Miu. Somrtimes I pity her for her dense thoughts. That's why I like your character thoghts style. I can't wait for your next chapter! ;)

'Somebody is living inside the damn gate... What's going on? How can anything be able to block the gate especially Ayane's? This is going to be interesting to find out what is happening...'
Keep up the good work... I'm happy that you reach number five. Go to number six if you can. See you theN!

it was a good story that takes place right after the end of the show and i wish that the creators of the show would make more eps so that they could show us what happens to the gatekeepers after the big battle. All in all, this was a good chapter and i think that you should keep writing them

'This seems that Ayane wanted to die so badly that she did not want anyone's help... I can understand what she is going through, having to ponder about his existence in her world. It's sad to see that her situation were usually similar to what we saw in our own world. Got to say this, there's no way anyone should die before knowing the reason why he or she lives in the first place...'
Keep up the good work, dude... 4 chapters already... Update soon, man.