aww sweet xx

This story is awesome, I loved it so much

Very sweet.

Angel.

very good. i do think horatio and calleigh belong together, despite teh presence of a certain sister in law

Oh! I liked it. Very good characterizations. H is very much like that. Not sure if C would break like that since she seems so strong. Her and Hagan just don't seem right on the show. H/C make a good couple - please write more.

Two words.
THE KISS. It rocked my world. It was awesome - it wasn't a mere kiss, it was poetry - and you manage to masterfully make their characters, and their emotions part of the physicality. I am dazzled and awed by this fic, KDeb. Thank you for a tremendous read. Loved every word.

He gets her room key after flashing a badge and a $20 bill ... why is it that image is so macho and sexy to me? ::ponders:: Ah well - it is of no consequence-they are building up to quite the show down, emotionally, and I can not WAIT to see how it ends!

Oh, the self doubts Calleigh feels just tear me up. And Horatio, so distracted and worried his office and work life are a war zone. Girl, I can not WAIT for them to confont each other!

What a start. WoW. You can feel Horatio's tension-Calleigh's angst - to a degree, in fact, that just sweeps you right into the story and the situations they are facing. Go KDeb, this one is gonna be AWESOME. :-D

That is an excellent start to a fic! You got straight in there and I'm looking forward to reading more!

In one word: Outstanding!