lovely sequel which was good to see given that the previous did leave a little opening to be played on. my only issue, and its something i forgot to mention last time is your confusion over names, place names especially.

Do you realise that for the 1st half Iolaus went to and killed himself in Delius. Then suddenly you call it Darius?

or how about Amphoria (which is where the whole thing started right? where he was grabbed from behind?)...why then in this do u call it Arcadia? or ru refering to two completely different places, maybe from actual episodes, and if so where and why do Delius and Amphoria fit into it?

otherwise nice follow up. the end to the dreams was particularly well done

great story

finally sweet dreams

Very nice - I liked the originality, and that it seems in fitting with the actual series as well, your characterisation is excellent. Overall, an all-round great fic. )

Sparky

Ooooh, I loved it! I love your stories! Please write more. You're really good. I can't wait to read more of your work. I really like the stories that focus on the bond that Hercules and Iolaus have. Anyhoo, please keep writing. You're really good! -

That was a good wrap up.

aw...i love stories like this *wipes tear from eye* love it!