Aaaaw, that's so sweet - yet I can't help thinking it'd be very weird to confess your love to someone turn to them and they've died on your shoulder... pretty awkward moment I'd have thought! Haha

But yea, a lovely story, well constructed and the characters remained true to those developed by JKR.

The only thing I'd want to know (as I'm a bit of a 'no stone left unturned' kinda girl) is what the spell actually did but not knowing didn't detract from the story at all.

A great read :)

For a first, this was pretty good.

aw that was sad but also cute

Is when you wrote "THE END" when she died or after? Just curious.

I loved this story, I wish that somehow Hermione wouldn't have died but I guess thats what makes the story so good, bittersweet love.

I can't imagine how Ron would have felt noticing Hermione had died,

"Oh my god, I killed Hermione! She died of shock." heh.

Great story though

why? couldn't she find a spell that can reverse the one the was hit with? what happened to th normal they get married and live happily ever after? besides that, it was good.

Oh my gosh that is so sad! Im like crying!(sniffs)Thats your first fanfic! OMG! thats amazing i love it and you can count on me to read all your fanfics! keep writing!(and is that the end of that story or is there another chapter?)

Sniff...tear! So emotional! Yet, so sweet. Luv it _

Wow..that's really sad. I like it...short and sweet. An don't worry, the grammar was not horrible, but as you already had made it clear that you know, could use a little work. That didn't matter though. You hooked me from start to finish...great job.

hey it's me! I like this story, it's good!

Wonderful. The ending is magnificent.

damn.

that...was sad. yet sweet. bittersweet there we go. lol. I'm adding this to my favorites.

First! No fair! Did you get the idea from The Little Matchbox Girl? It is so sad!

This is so beautiful. You've seriously made me love Ron/Hermione. Holy shit. I love you. LOL KEEP WRITING! MAKE A SEQUAL! *dies*

omg! great story. but now you've got me crying. :tear: