I love this cute little story! Too bad they gotta hide it. ~ ;D

Nice

Really cute, I like the way you wrote this. I think you capture the sense of intimacy between Shinobu and Misturu well. And I can absolutely see Shinobu waking someone, even his lover, up with a dose of cold water. He's so wonderfully evil. I really wish we could have learned more about his ** up family, but there you are. I can always speculate.

wow, this was amazingly well written! i was able to get a good sense of the characters and situation...you're very talented.

and it was cute. so again, congratulations.

Aw...i skipped parts...but it overall seemed cute ^_^ me likey.

That was really cute! One thing, though, it's spelled "senpai" not "sempai". I know that some companies spell it that way, which I'm still confused as to why, but it isn't the right way. I'm not flaming your work! I just wanted to give you some advise! Other than that, this was a great fic! Shinobu and Mitsuru is my favorite couple in that anime/manga!

i like it!

that was beautiful without being corny or over-the-top!

o o Me like! Me like! XD More please ^__^

D*MN, that took a long time 2 load up ^_^
Review stuff is slow *babblebabble*
ya anyhoo, kool fic u gotta write more of em ok?
jaa na *ShiTsuru 4evr*
^_^ *V*

Wow, a new Greenwood fic! And a wonderful one at that :)... It left me all warm and fuzzy inside :).
Keep up good work :).