why not make thist story so saron wins and gets the ring and frees morgoth

I like the tone. There is an ominous feeling to it. I especially enjoyed the moment where Sauron kiled the sanga (?) by just touching it, exhibiting his fury. It's so short, though, that I want to read more. I feel as though there isn't enough to critique and get a sense for your style. Also, translate the saying on the ring so that we non-Tolkien-ites can follow along.
Mr. B

You know who I am (and you know where I live...Yikes! *runs away*...*comes back armed with a machete* Hah!) Anyway, this is good, a bit too jumpy though. But good! Hurrah! ^__^

Very good! Me like! ^_^ One comment: I don't think 'damn' fits Sauron's character. I think you'd need something a bit more vulgar. Write more!

This is soo cool. It is well written, keep it up and update soon ^_^ I want to know what happens, I hate and love the cliffhangers, but hey, hurry up man or else I'll sick bob the purple balrog on you, or Sauron's cat... one of the two... or both, aw well, just hurry up and update

This is really funny. I like seeing the evil character's point of view. What does Sauron try? Oh, you have a typo in the summary. You wrote Saurong instead of Sauron.

This is cool I really like it PLESE continue SOON!

Hi! I actually remembered the name!
Anyways...I like the fic. But may I suggest a beta reader for punctuation stuffs? Also, longer chapters are often appreciated...
One more thing...I suggest you accept anonymous reviews. You will get more that way.
~Sharone