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| JL69 2006-08-30 ch 7,  | abuseOh it's finished...why! Great writing! |
| cleis 2006-08-19 ch 7, | abusei love this story! i've read it a couple of times now and i never get bored reading it again! :) |
| funkycool 2005-11-13 ch 7, | abuseWow! What a story! That was so brilliantly written and you had so many good twists and turns in the story, I couldn't stop reading! I'm happy that they're finally together. |
| cloris 2005-03-17 ch 7, anon. | abuseits just like you channeled jim... its so amazing! |
| keika_bee 2005-03-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseThat was so frickin awesome. I like how you made Jim seem human and not just some made up part of a made-up fantasy. The only word that I can use to describe this work is awesome. |
| texasgrrl 2005-01-13 ch 7, | abusehey i loved your story great work im happy that you kept to their personalities well it really was good |
| Miggyrow 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI kept reading and reading it again. This fic always makes me laugh. I love your style. It's so smart, so witty. I think it's the best swat fic ever. I love Jim and Chris shipper, they get along so well ! They're so cute, so sexy together ! It' s almost impossible for me to find french swat fic... So when I find fics like yours so cool, I'm so happy. Continue writing ! You have a french fan ! P.S: Sorry for the grammar. Well because, like I said before, I'm french. I understand english but talking is a different matter. ^_^ |
| peeps42 2004-06-01 ch 7, | abuseGreat story loved how you brought back David from the movie. Deke and Boxer were classic loved the stuff about watching it like a movie. Hondo was great being the one to call them on the attraction. Then how both Chris and Jim were to dense to notice what was happening between them. So sad that it is over but it was one hell of a story. |
| Joanie S. 2004-02-14 ch 7, | abuseThis story is ** great. I hope you do a follow-up. |
| correctionrock 2004-02-08 ch 7, | abuseThis is the best fan fic ever. I loved it. I think David is an **. Im glad u got him out of the way |
| Girl Anachronism07 2004-02-08 ch 7, | abuseI have a new favorite author, thing was funny as hell. Very down to earth and believable, you're on my favorites. |
| Ra 2004-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood opener. Heavy on the exposition but good for the reader that has yet to watch the film. (or was too distracted by the pretty people to pay much attention to plot points) The end was an excellent hook. I'm off to read part two. Very excited. |
| frescasenorita 2004-01-23 ch 7, | abuseWow! that was well done I am so Happy you wrote it to because there arn't many in this catagourie. This is the best fic I have read to far! |
| stoictimer 2004-01-21 ch 7, | abusehahaha nice ending. i hope you keep on writing. i had fun reading this story. later |
| stoictimer 2004-01-21 ch 6, | abusehell yes! Still, Street is acting stupid |