This story was fabulous. Wished they would have explored the Chris/Jim relationship more in the move.

This was an excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it. It was very well written and incredibly funny. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Oh it's finished...why!
Great writing!

i love this story! i've read it a couple of times now and i never get bored reading it again! :)

Wow! What a story! That was so brilliantly written and you had so many good twists and turns in the story, I couldn't stop reading! I'm happy that they're finally together.

its just like you channeled jim...
its so amazing!

That was so frickin awesome. I like how you made Jim seem human and not just some made up part of a made-up fantasy. The only word that I can use to describe this work is awesome.

hey i loved your story great work im happy that you kept to their personalities well it really was good

I kept reading and reading it again. This fic always makes me laugh. I love your style. It's so smart, so witty. I think it's the best swat fic ever. I love Jim and Chris shipper, they get along so well ! They're so cute, so sexy together ! It' s almost impossible for me to find french swat fic... So when I find fics like yours so cool, I'm so happy.
Continue writing ! You have a french fan !
P.S: Sorry for the grammar. Well because, like I said before, I'm french. I understand english but talking is a different matter. ^_^

Great story loved how you brought back David from the movie. Deke and Boxer were classic loved the stuff about watching it like a movie. Hondo was great being the one to call them on the attraction. Then how both Chris and Jim were to dense to notice what was happening between them. So sad that it is over but it was one hell of a story.

This story is ** great. I hope you do a follow-up.

This is the best fan fic ever. I loved it. I think David is an **. Im glad u got him out of the way

I have a new favorite author, thing was funny as hell. Very down to earth and believable, you're on my favorites.

Good opener. Heavy on the exposition but good for the reader that has yet to watch the film. (or was too distracted by the pretty people to pay much attention to plot points) The end was an excellent hook. I'm off to read part two. Very excited.

Wow! that was well done I am so Happy you wrote it to because there arn't many in this catagourie. This is the best fic I have read to far!