Beautiifully written! you stayed very well in character too! May I ask though-are the inkeepers Ritsu and his mom from fruits basket? lol it just sounds llike it is all XD

liked it!

i love this story, its absolutely wonderful. tho i think things might get mesy if yukito ever found out about this, especially since he thinks they're two different people...

OHH,WOW!THAT WAS SO SWEET!
Great work,and I hope to see more.^-^

this is so sweet! i like how you incorporated Yue into the story and showed distinct character differences between him and Yukito! :)

do i sense a tiny bit of fruits basket in there or is that just me?

*smiles* It was nice!

Aww! Yue and Touya are so sweet...
And a Fruits Basket mention! Rikku was my favourite character!

Aww! That was cute! Please write more!

Gosh, that was so cut! I love yué, i do love Yukito and Toya! Please write us other fanfic about them you do it so well!
shani

The imagery in this was great. I had to laugh over Sakura's thinking they were on a class trip, though. Pft. And the reappearance of understanding!Fujitaka. Well, in the anime he does seem persistently okay with everything and downright unflappable. Sometimes I wish he'd be a tiny bit shocked, but I guess he has some of that all-knowing Clowness... or half of it, anyways.
The long hairs on Touya's pillow and the backseat to food thing... so kawaii. I also liked the whole "we love where we will" and the er, "I've gotten used to you" thing. Yue is so cute when he's stiff and formal! ^_^

Nice. I honestly didn't know what to expect, going into this, but I was very pleasantly surprised.
"Yue might never say it aloud, but Touya knew the right way to listen."
I like the way you phrased this, and illustrated it.
Well done.

That was very well written. It was sweet too, and stayed in-character. Very nice.
On a side note- this is the Sohma hotspring isn't it? 'Cause that sure sounded like Ritsu and his mom.

Aw, how sweet

Holy moly, but I think that you are my new favorite! (Like you care... but isn't it nice to be adored?) That's the hot spring from Fruits Basket, isn't it?
"Oh, the cleverness of you!"
I'm really glad that you are so prolific.