What a well-written fic. It really is refreshing to read a fic where things are worded beautifully, and the characters are so right that you feel you know them... I really enjoyed this story, it was angsty but cute, a perfect combination!

I feel symphaty to Fuji. Eventhough he knew the consequences to play like that, he still did it for Yuuta. He just couldn't help it. You know, it makes me want to read it from Yuuta's view. Of course he knew why Fuji played that way. Does he feel guilty sometimes to give Fuji a cold shoulder? Love your story.

i have read your fanfiction in GWing, so realizing that you'd somehow managed to get sucked into the world of TeniPuri was cause for jubliation indeed. and then, i'm lucky in that we seem to have similar taste in pairings =) being a fuji fangirl, it's very important to me that people try to capture his complexity, his complete lack of openness, his fierce love for yuuta and the ways in which he shows it. it's equally important that they pair him with tezuka =) now, you have managed to do both those things in this story with your trademark deftness and subtlety. i believe it's the last line that clinches it for me, with the picture that it draws of a lifetime of unspoken words and carefully fitting into each other.
sometimes i get irritated when i see that brilliant fics don't get the feedback they deserve; this would definitely be one of those times.

Interesting. I love the simpleness in this story. Very sweet. 9_9 Are they communicating with their eyes or something?
Anyways I like it. Nice work!!

whee!! daisuki!! that was a wonderful ficlet ^_^

I like how this was written. What else to say...um...keep it up!

whee! great fic^^ great tezufuji fic XD... can't get enough of those two ^^; please do write more ^_^

Interesting. I liked it. For lack of better things to say, Ja~