Crayon is either going to go into a jealous rage, cry, kill Chris or all three.

And sometimes that is all that can be said.

*sigh*

wonderful! I've been looking for a Chris/Erutis and couldn't find any! yey! XD XD and it's written so well too XD

Woah! Very good! It's so short...and yet very sweet! Cool dude! Very cool! Luv ya, bye

Yuki Haitani_

Kinda short, but interesting. Any chance you write more?

that was absoulutely adorable. i love the very last line. still, SO SHORT! couldnt you make it a little longer? u_u

Okay...I now wonder where to begin.
Eru. loves Krayon in the manga and I do belive that everyone is intitled to their own opinion. But I greatly dislike the shortness you could do better. And please don't tell me ya don't have time cause I have school, homework, two bands, and a FSMA tournment thats really big coming up. So put a little more effort in it next time.
I havent read any of your other works if any so i don't know if their longer. But strive not for your apex of ability, just let it mature through your imagination. Thats one of the most important things. I probably ranting but I know you can do better. I look forward to your next publishing.
Shylay

100 Words? Still good anyway.

Short, sweet, and very fun. I like it.

gatta love his stupid smile(he is so cute!)

Yeah! I think you've got Erutis' thoughts perfectly. Although I kind of wanted to see her with that demon who has a crush on her. Great scene.

Okay, I give up...What happened?

Oh god! This was so clever! I thought this was so good I went and had a look at your Inuyasha fics, and _ WHY_ haven't you updated your story "Things worth dying for"? It's so original, well-written, and good. Please, I would love it if you continued. (And I like your Naruto stuff too)

hehe... now if only it were longer...

like it