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| Bouncy cat 2007-09-25 ch 1,  | abuseVery well written, you really made me feel it. |
| lea26karla 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. The emotions were described perfectly, I felt sad, too. I was wondering, too, how Ryoma would be if ever something happened to Karupin and this one makes absolute sense on what might happen. Really great. :3 **Lea** |
| Tri Cenedril 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's sad... poor karupin, and poor ryoma. You wrote it beautifully!! |
| Mazie 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE IT! Oh, well, maybe I shouldn't sound so happy like that because of what happened to Karupin... but I really did love this fic! |
| Renn 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAww...poor Ryoma...but at least, Momo's there for him... |
| shadowcat15 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuse*makes a squeaky noise, and goes to cuddle her cats* One of my cats died three weeks ago, I can relate to Ryoma. |
| KagomeGirl021 2004-12-16 ch 1, | abuseaww soo sad but you could have ended it with a light kiss it would of probably cheered ryoma up a lot more ^_^ |
| Tora Macaw 2004-11-12 ch 1, | abuseOH...So sweet and so sad!! But a very nice little tale. * pause to dash tear from eye...* |
| ITSAME 2004-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseUwahh! *cries* T__T This was so sad! Although Momo does seem the type you would go to for consolation when a pet dies. ^^; |
| nall 2004-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuse;_; you've made it so real ;_; great writing! |
| MorphailEffect 2004-01-10 ch 1, | abusedamn, that hurt. but thank you for writing it, i've been needing a good cry... |
| Mika-chan 2004-01-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, you have me all teary-eyed. When I clicked on this story I wasn't expecting how well this would be written. I always found the relationship betwen Ryoma and his cat interesting (and very adorable) considering how Ryoma usually behaves and I've been waiting for someone to write a story about it. How you conveyed Ryoma's thoughts throughout the entire story was very believable and I guess it was just done so well done that I could really *feel* how Ryoma was feeling. And then bringing Momo in at the end was perfect as well. This was a very heartwarming story and I enjoyed it a lot :) |
| delfeus 2004-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseWAAH! Not my lovely furball! Poor Ryoma. I'm Happy Momo is there for him. Wonderfully written and believable story. |
| Cheeseburger of Doom 2004-01-08 ch 1, | abuseaw poor Ryoma! *sniffle* |