i read this like a year ago and haven't reveiwed until now, but, i luv how you are making the story about their realasionship evolving and not about sex. i makes this story better and easier to read

you have captured the personality of ed and abbie very very well. i love how you take their realashionship slowly and realisticly, as opposed to all about sex. keep up the good work

Great story! I love the way you crafted their relationship and the reactions they have to deal with, but love seems to be winning out! I can just hear Abbie chewing out her co-worker. I love this one.

Still as good as ever...please finish this!

Go, girl! I have enjoyed seeing this story develop and Abbie's shut-down of Monica was *priceless.*

I see no need for improving this story. It was thoroughly enjoyable and very on point when it comes to interracial dating in this so called enlightened age. I've looked a long time for a Ed Greene story as I adore Jesse L. Martin and cannot understand why he isn't swimming in offers for romantic leads. A bonus was finding Abby as his love interest. . .my favorite ADA ever. Please write more about this couple. I enjoyed your story immensely and found it professionally crafted, the introduction of Ed's family and their characterizations real and informed, and you managed to keep both Ed and Abby in harmony with their TV characters. Good job. I look forward to reading more.

Excellent, excellent post! So was dying for you to update, I'm loving this story! I can totally relate to this chapter, it's happened to me before - all the misconceptions and that. You're dealing with it so well and I'm really grateful for that. So yey, keep going it's so good!

I have been waiting for this for ages.
Thanx.
It was awesome!

Oh Jennifer James, that was a wonderful entry. It's been a while since I read any Ed/Abbie fic from you. So glad you decided to pick this up again. Wonderfully written and might I say, you have the Abbie voice down perfectly. Abbie's response to Monica would've been mine as well.

On a side note, now that there are more chapters of your lovely novel up and there are no kiddies around (ah the wonders of summer camp) I have more time to read. YAY for me!! and thanks for the fic.

Brilliant as always! I'd say more, but you've left me speechless.

Wow, this fic is great. It's witty and real, and very well written. I can both hear and see what they say and do perfectly. You've built it as a natural progression too, it's completely believable. You've captured such a good chemistry between Abbie and Ed. I'm a huge fan of both, especially Abbie. I think you've brought out a wonderful side to them both, and created a wonderful match. Please, keep on writing!

I love it continue SOON!

JJ. You're killing me with this installment plan. But I LOVE this story. More than I ever would have thought. Abbie/Ed. LOVE it.

AWESOME chapter.
I loved it.
I love how Abbie got nervous before seeing everyone.
I love her last comment.
I have read this story a couple of times waiting for the latest chapter.
GREAT job!

this is great! WRITE MORE