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| Ami Angel 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseif only this was how it really was... |
| maki 2008-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abusenot bad. im also a firm believer in If-naruto-would-have-found-him-instead-of-sakura-he-would-have-stayed. like totally ,right? |
| coworly 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseV_V if only that happened. Stupid Sasuke for running away to Orochimaru. Other than that, I like your writing style! |
| Asterisks 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abusethat was really nice! Wish that would have been how things went along. |
| green-pink-purple 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I agree! (if only masashi kishimoto was as clever as u are XD) |
2007-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuselolz how Sasuke fell for that trick is something I'd deffiantly do! I always blurt out things like a complete idiot. Like one Christmas, many many many years ago, my mom kept asking me what I got for her. And after about the 6th time she asked I said, "I'm not going to tell you I bought you a hat!!" What an idiot I am. A rambling idiot at that. *stops rambling's with a congradulations for another awesome story and leaves* |
| Ms Trick 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseOh I would MURDER for the series to have gone this way instead. Like legitimately kill someone. Beautifully written, as usual. :) |
| XoHikarix 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseWhy couldn't that have happened?! DAMNIT XD That was nice. |
| menolly1019 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseHuh, you gave me a good perspective on the whole Sasuke avenger thing. I never could believe that he could give it up before, even for love. If you look at it from the anger angle it wouldn't happen. But if you see the pain and realize he's holding on so hard because he's afraid he has nothing else.. that just might work. All he needs is to find something to live for and poof! No more Itachi-obsession. Thanks for solving that little dilemma. I love that Naruto ended up talking him back into going after Itachi. They were good reasons too and not just random arguments. It's not like nothing changed either. Baby steps! He got Sasuke to accept help without even consciously trying. That's why Naruto always worked. He viewed the world his way and expected it to be true. So when he presented his beliefs to the world they didn't resist them, but thought that he might be right. I see the Kakashi and Naruto thing as a chemical thing versus an emotional thing. Sasuke obviously has a crush on Itachi, but from his description it sounds very physical. He doesn't seek Kakashi's approval, just his touch. He really is starting to admire Naruto's attitude in a deep little dark part of his mind that refuses to be acknowledged. I love the concept and the way you carried it out. Happy Writing. |
| A1tissimo 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseSimply wonderful. I love what-if fics, in a sad and slightly twisted way. |
| magicalbrat 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abusei love it and really wish you would add more |
| Tsuki no Yuri 2007-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseIf only, if only... Now I'm depressed that it didn't go that way. T_T But, I'm happy I read such a plausable way for it to have gone well. All those thoughts/situations were pretty canon; they practicaly could have happened in the manga! (except for Sasuke's thoughts on Kakashi... ^/^; *only in my dreams* XD) |
| esther 2007-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseeverything except the sasukaka moments was awesome. SO believable. i wish it had happened that way instead...but then we would have missed out on all these beautiful naruto-angsting-over-sasuke moments :P |
| Majestically Mystical 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseSweet, cute, and... Sasuke was... ... ... pretty much in character. [His gaze shifted from Naruto to the scrawled ‘Become Hokage!’ note pinned above the kitchen sink.] That was so cute! >. |
| Horong 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, it's all in character, and perfect! That's all I can say! We need more authors like you! |