Reviews for Waiting for You
MissM 1/12/04 . chapter 4
Only thing what I want to say about this story. This is best of the best fanfics I have ever read, so realistic, absolutely wonderful! Enjoyed every minute of it!
Hope you write more stories soon!
emartin 1/12/04 . chapter 4
Wonderful ending! I enjoyed this story very much and am sorry to see it come to an end! Keep writing!
JoolsFan 1/12/04 . chapter 3
Oh and one more thing - this is about chapter 4, but wouldn't allow me to review twice in a row on the same chapter.
"Has your technique improved since Paris?" he asked with feigned apprehension.
"I don't know," she started, walking slowly towards him. "You're the expert. You tell me."
Georg scanned her once over and narrowed his eyes at her in calculation. "I'd say you're picking up on a thing or two."
This is my absolute fave line in any fanfic in history.
And I'm not thinking 'shaving' here. Hope that's not just me.
JoolsFan 1/12/04 . chapter 4
Loved it. Just loved it.
I'm SO glad he finally barged into that room... But you do love to torture the poor man, don't you? ;-)
As this was the Stefan universe I knew there had to be a happy ending, but you managed to keep the whole story gripping right until the end.
Your description of Maria as she is in labour was very in character and scarily realistic. And the Captain bringing up the pretzel vendor (whom I adored! LOL) was just a brilliant idea.
I enjoyed reading this very, very much and will certainly go back to it more than once. Only, maybe not anymore if I ever get pregnant! LOL
RiskaSG 1/12/04 . chapter 4
I was perfectly satisfied with your reasons for Stefan beeing a boy, LOL.
And I was perfectly satisfied with your story! At some parts of the last chapter I gasped for breath, like when the doctor was saying the Baby went back. I'm so glad the Captain finally stormed the room and helped Maria. (Loved his little trick, LOL)
This is a fantastic Fan-Fic, and I really hope you'll write another one soon!
Kylie18 1/11/04 . chapter 4
Wow, that was great. I loved the whole thing, the flashbacks made it that much more enjoyable. I really loved that the Captain felt that he had a right, and that he should be in with Maria when she gave birth to their child. I was rooting for him to just go in and be with Maria, from the very beginning. So when he finally did, I was practically cheering. I loved the way it ended. Great job as always!
Kylie
Lizzy127 1/11/04 . chapter 3
I need the conclusion! LOL... great chapter! I really get into this story when I read it... like I said before, it's very emotional. I really hate how Georg has to wait outside! It's such torture! Well, anywho... I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I really can't wait to find out what happens _
1883 1/11/04 . chapter 3
This is a wonderful story. I love the flashbacks. They add so much to the story. I also really like this storyline. I think it's terrible that Georg has to wait outside. A father has every place to be with his wife when she's in labor. If I were him I would have ignored Frau Schimdt. Well I am looking forward to the rest of this. I'm glad you are writing again. You are very talented. I hope for more stories for you. One thing...you keep mentioning the baby as him? How do they know it's a boy? I don't know how something like that would be found out in these times. Update soon.
Emilyn
MissM 1/11/04 . chapter 3
I really, really love this story! I can see that you have whole story written already before you even start posting it, and that's what I really appreciate. You never keep us waiting too long before you update your stories. Thank you! I always enjoy your stories!
vivs 1/11/04 . chapter 3
this is a wonderful story. better than most.
emartin 1/11/04 . chapter 3
Wonderful! I just love the "bully" line directed at Frau Schmidt- it made me laugh bc it is so in character for her! I am quite anxious to read the conclusion to this story, as you have effectively built the emotions so well throughout. Again, it was very well written and the dialouge demonstrated such interesting banter between all of the characters. I cannot wait until tomorrow to read the conclusion to this! :)
RiskaSG 1/11/04 . chapter 3
I'm so glad you updated! Reading this stroy always fills me with suspense. It's just grand how you managed it to mix the flashbacks, the present, comedian elements as well as drama elements to this wonderful piece of work. Oh, my fav. sentence of this chapter is certainly: "Just breathe, Maria," he whispered. She opened her eyes and gave him what he swore was an angry glare of indignation" *GG* Great job!
MissM 1/10/04 . chapter 2
Great, absolutely great story! I love it! Please post new chapter soon! I can't wait to read more this wonderful story! You are so talented writer, I always enjoy reading your stories.
JoolsFan 1/10/04 . chapter 2
Damn propriety indeed! I can imagine how hard it must be for him not to burst into that room.
I loved the flashback in this story. It's both sweet and touching, and also showing how much Maria has matured since she married Georg. Their banter is so sweet and amusing.
I agree that it's more likely Maria would have felt the baby move at this stage of the pregnancy (as a new aunt, I've heard more about having babies in the last months than I care to remember) but really, I liked to read it in Eight on Wednesday, too.
Anyway, very good chapter, I'll set my alarm early for tomorrow to check if you've updated!
Lizzy127 1/10/04 . chapter 2
Great chapter... as always! This is a really emotional story. The whole thing with Maria screaming and crying... *shudders* it's a bit unnerving. But, it's only because of your wonderful writing that it can be that way. You have an amazing talent! Your description is wonderful, and your choice of words to use is always perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter... I'm eager to find out what happens next _
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