good start, please continue

This good so far if a little confusing in the beggining when Harry changes his name at the Muggle pub he refers to himself as Jon. And then near the middle and end of the chapter the narration refers to him as Mark at least twice. What's up with that? Mistake? Multipule personalities? Harry's not really Harry?

this seems very very interesting!

This deserves a review, even though I've no idea what to say... hm. A few spelling errors that really stood out to me (some of my pet peeve words, things that sound similar but not quite the same in my head). The story... well, I obviously think it's good so far, or I wouldn't have bothered to write a review... Hm. I don't think Harry can leave the position to Snape though... I would think that would be Dumbledore's choice. I guess Snape must have some reason behind demanding it though, which either means Harry COULD leave the position to him, or there's some ulterior motive... I like the style and tone of the piece. And I think that I've now said enough for someone who had nothing to say.

1 penny, 2 pence, 5 pence, 10 pence, 20 pence, 50 pence, 1 pound and 2 pound are the only coin values in pounds sterling, nthen its five pounds (a 'fiver'), 10 pounds (a 'tenner') and fifty pounds in notes. Nothing larger than that, except perhaps a hundred pound note, but I've never seen one. Even fifty pound notes are rare. Thought you'd like to know.

Oh... Update please! (Will this be slash?)

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :)

Jan

interesting

Mark makes his classes interesting? Severus is very curious? Will Snapey help or hinder?

You called me silly! :P hehe.. This was an.. interesting chapter. At times it was a little confusing to figure out who was saying what. Loved how Harry said "5 points to Slytherin." please update soon! :)

Very interesting. So many twists and turns. The weredragon concept is interesting. Pity it's not slash :P; I can really see it happening. Update soon!

DCorvus

I'm confused. I really am. I thought that Harry didn't spell Sev? I thought he just spelled Albus. ...::winces:: This is making my head hurt.

~Sabrina

I do hope you update soon.

wow extremely cool. i dont quite understand the "rain alarm" thing...

this is great, i really like the story