Why is it that Link is always the one getting screwed over in the end after he gave everything to save Hyrule? I never understood that theme in the Zelda series.

Anyway, very nice piece of work here. Definitely stirred up some emotions within me.

oh...how sad! how beautiful! very very good.

I enjoyed this one very much. The ending was great, expecially concidering that usually fanfics are happy ^_^ I liked it.

Sad, but.. you know.. quite refreshing.

The only thing I would critizise is maybe his death was too dramatic and prolonged... but I'm a realist at heart.

Keep writing.

Write hard,
write long,
write until dawn,
~FDW

Wow, that was realyl good. I think I'll cry now. ;_;

My god...That was just...wow...

so sad... you could write a whole load of crap based off of this one-shot. "i've gone so far..and yet..hyrule is the loveliest of them all.." i wonder what all of the other places were like..

aww dude... you killed him :( poor linky! but at least he doesnt have to fight too much

NO! He shouldn't have died! *sob*
Anyway,this is so sweet. I like it, even though Link dies. I'm so sad I can't even spell...Your writing has gotten to me, if you couldn't tell. I've read a lot of fanfics where Link dies but have always managed to brush the death off. *sigh*

Wow...I got out of being a Zelda/Link fan awhile ago thanks to some bashing Zelda/Yaoi fics...but that hit the spot.

It was beautifully written, and brilliantly thought up. Link's death (although I was on the edge of crying) was truley perfect. Goign away ot hell, yet dying in his heaven. Curse you for making me poetic! *shakes fist at computer*

Wonderful job! Please keep it up! I'm reading/read all your work!!

Well done, You are one of very few writers who can write a good Zelda fanfic. Normaly they make me sick at how they change the story way to much so its no longer a Zelda fanfic or just rewrite the actull game. This one in paticular (how ever you spell it) was brillent. Nice work mate. Love to see more of your work.

I've read this at least 5 times now, and it still leaves me with that clenching feeling in my gut. You described everything so well, it's so vivid in my minds eye. Well done, as always. I look foreward to more of your writing!

Oh my gosh... this was absolutely beautiful... I cried!
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Lovely piece of work! I love it!
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- Selah

Beautiful. I love this fic. I so enjoy it when Link dies, honorably anyway. It's good to see some people can still write a good tragedy/angsty fic. Keep up the great work!

Aw! I'm gonna cry now... :( That's so incredibly sad! I like it! Wonderful, as always. You're writing's the best!

Gah! *Sobs* POOR Link!! *tears flood keyboard* Your story had best not end like this - IT HAS to stay as AU, or I'll be sad... *sniffle* This was good! Update your other stories soon, and keep up the good work! *wails in grief*