Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Judas Kiss

Delie
2004-03-27
ch 1,
abuseOh no,what happened? Did Mr and Mrs Potter die? Is Remus having a secret affair with Mrs Potter and Dumbledore found out that she is having werewolf babies and had to inform the ministry? *triumphantly* I'm right aren't I? Yipe!Ok, maybe not. Sirius made me laugh-lots. “Moony, what’s a phone number?
who knows - i certainly don...
2004-01-19
ch 1, anon.
abusewell i would like to start off by saying i think your story is brocolli :P
what can i say, i think this needs more reviews and ffnt only lets u review stories once when signed in. had to use all my initiative to get here without signing in i tell you.
anyway tis a very kool story. have just re-read it and ur reviews too. everyone loves you! i loved davids review very funny. I think ill make a habit of reading his reviews :P Its the ... This is excellent. ... This is not excellent. hehe.
I love reading stories where people are having lots of fun. It just fills you with a warm glow dont you think? like your hospital scene. lovely.
anyway i think ive wrote more than enough for a review dont wanna do an essay like mark :P no offence if ur reading this mark :)
Great Great story! Get david to advertise it for u! that always works. Tho maybe not... ethical (was that the word i was looking for?)
Anyway (again) loved it.
Now more Tom Riddle! And Soon!
Frank
2004-01-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow...this story is so good, it is like the best story ever written. I have read nearly every Marauders story ever published on this website, and this is the best!
Well done.
Phoenix Firefly
2004-01-09
ch 1,
abusethat's the best chapter of a fic on the marauders i've ever read. you got them so in character!! Increadiable. Please tell me there will be more! I love the way you write Remus, so quick witted and smart. i love remmy! Keep going, i HAVE to read more!
Cheers
Phoenix
Daintress
2004-01-09
ch 1,
abuseThis is GREAT! So in character and interesting, and DETAILED. I can picture it. Very fun to read. I'll check back for updates! Hope you'll take a look at my fics as well.
Evilgrinch
2004-01-09
ch 1,
abuse1. Would Remus give Harry a toy wolf? He doesn't want to scare the kid.
2. 'He reached down and pulled the wrestling canines from the floor, setting the wolf back on the table and absentmindedly stroking the dog while he talked.'
COULD YOU BE ANY LESS SUBTLE??!!?!?!?
3. 'Sirius forgetting to get onto the train because he was chatting up the girl standing next to him on the station.'
This is Excellent
4. 'Remus noticed both of these: picked up the toys and pulled Sirius away'
This is not Excellent.
5. “No…Padfoot’s his cool godfather, who buys him presents that are too expensive and shares his mental age.”
This line rules.
6. I really, really liked this story. I think it ended abruptly... obviously, because more chapters are to come...but I am curious to read the next few parts and see what happens.
Sand Castles are great.
EloraCooper4
2004-01-09
ch 1,
abusewhoa you got me I'm hooked! Write more soon. I think you really have the perfect Sirius. It was cute they way you had Sirius being the cool godfather. I'm also impressed at your small comments that echo the books such as the constant viligance, made me smile. update soon...hmm...who was Remus dating and why wasn't it me? te he thanx for the lovely read!
Kyrissaean
2004-01-09
ch 1,
abuseand polkat writes yet another new story without even updating her others. *scowls*
i dont know why i should review this one, i am too upset to even try...humpf...okay okay
good story...again
I like reading happy sirius at beach
i can tell this will be great and will get mucho reviews.
Unlike that JJ Rounding you will be around forever.
I wonder if all these stories will be up here forever. constantly here for people to read and review. interesting
i like the idea
anyway
yea
kool
sigh
Mordacis
2004-01-09
ch 1,
abuseVery cool. I love james, remy, and Sirius' interaction and Lily's great too. Sirius with Harry is wonderful. And I loved Padfoot's sand castle LOL
Great job!
Return to Top