Aww...that was so heartbreaking. But i loved it anyway. Short but good. D

was great ..a tear or two.

i love harry/luna he should be with her,not ginny.

but tear jerking.

Oh poor Harry... very good job. This is the first time a fanfic has ever sent a shiver through me... yay angst.

Interesting experiment with the typical Harry Potter death scene. Don't think it quite works, but the dialogue is good.

Hehee This is great as usual, even if I barely review any of your stories as well as this being posted in our H/L thread. Eh, you got everything - angst, drama, romance...so sweet.

Arrgghh!
You had to post it here, didn't you?
You just rip my heart out with these angsty Harry/Luna stories, I swear...
LoL, after reading the other reviews, I guess they didn't notice your preamble stating it was a response to a challenge.
But keep WRITING! I for one can't wait to see what treasures you have in store...

*confused* interesting, this has to be my first Harry/Luna story I have ever read. I feel like it's lacking something but it's really good :)

um...that was kind odd. where was the basis of the story, what happened? it was some good writing, i liked it but i was a bit confused?
Phoenix