Very sad story...

Yay he's back! And hopefully with his conscience set at a lower level so there is not as much to interfere with his smirking. Sun in the Matrix? It really is a special day for him to arrive back!

oh! Evil! heehehehe! at least smiths pain is over. goodie!

Aw. Poor Smithy, he deleted himself! Suicide *sniff* But he will be back, and more evil and smirking than ever we can hope. Is this really the end? Or is there more to come?

aw... is that the end? I couldn't tell! Damn I'm thick! Poor Smith! Poor poor Smithy! He'll never be deleted from my heart! *sobs*

His emotions are certainly building up. It's going to be messy when they explode I bet! Spiraling out of control - that sums it up. Another cool chapter.

col! moremoremore!

aw...poor smith...

Wow, I love the way this is building up. You've got a very nice crescendo of tone going here - the human guilt is coming out drop by drop. It's a good idea, to take one tiny incident and build Smith's characterisation simply around that rather than trying to generalise his experiences. It makes the proceedings and the emotion so much more intense. Please continue! ^_^

Nice!Good job in every respect. Update soon please!

Not only the children managed to miss the blood - I did too. Whoops... Hmm might have seen them dying a bit earlier if I hadn't missed that. Crimson waves of doubt and anxiety - cool image.

col!
and yet
weird!
more plz!
*I love it when smith gets all emotional:):)*

I see why it's like that film in the Animatrix, yeah. Br, it's very chilling - particularly that bloodstain on the wall near the start. Great foreshadowing.
I love some of the descriptive phrases you use - for example, "danger dancing on every syllable of his words" - lines like that have a brilliant rhythm to them. Excellently captured atmosphere in that respect. Well done!

Wow, cool! By any chance ,is this related to the Animatrix short Beyond? I liked this, keep writing!

ARGH! it was all going so well untill the end! Why kill them?!?!?! brainwashing them would be more fun! then again, the summary looked good and I didn't notice what kind of story it was. oh well. smith will suffice I guess. shocking!