are you sure you didin't make the song up?? ;) because it fits PERFECTLY with the story!! omg, i don't know if anyone else does this, but i normally sing along to songfics, even if i don't know the tune. this was absouluty beautiful. congrats to you! keep writing! :)
~MFCMC

are you sure you didin't make the song up?? ;) because it fits PERFECTLY with the story!! omg, i don't know if anyone else does this, but i normally sing along to songfics, even if i don't know the tune. this was absouluty beautiful. congrats to you! keep writing! :)
~MFCMC

Ah... This gave me such a warm, fuzzy feeling inside... :-D

Great work! Keep writing AF stuff!

- The Doctor

You know... With 'The Opal Incident' out, you could conceivably... Write a sequel... Just a thought...

Oh my gosh this story made me cry. I so love artemis fowl love stories. im such a romantic person. glad to see there are others who think like me.

amizing! a little ooc but it had to be to really go with the song...really well written!

no. thats not the end. you have to write more! NOW!

Excellent, blooming excellent

aw...poor arty and holly...

i LOVED that story...i never get tired of different arty/holly goodbyes before the mindwipe...

anywho BANZAI!
~hollybridgetpeppermint

This is so beautifully written. It was so sad，sweet，and touching. I loved this. I also loved how you used the words. Fantastic job on this! ^^

Congratulations on being nommed for an Orion award!

I don't usually read songfics, but seeing yours was one of the nominees in that category, I followed the link, and I'm glad I did.

It's subtly done, and unlike a lot of H/A, you haven't pushed either of them out of character, you've acknowledged their differences and flaws and used that as the basis of the relationship - very real.

Thank you for writing this, and I hope you do well in the awards.

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wow, that's really beautiful. it made me cry. then again, lots of things make me cry. whatever, i liked it.

*crying* beautiful, very good, loved it, will there be more ^__^

I Love it!
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that was so cute i like that story .well done