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Reviews For: The Man That You Fear
S. Chensu and Luff 2005-07-24 . chapter 1
Ah, cutesy little one-shot and what looked like a depressing story turned out happy and all because of a rice ball! I wanted to know about the scar on Bakura’s arm, what did he have to protect him from? Oh well, this just means I can make it up! Wahoo!

S. Chensu x.
Abi2 2004-11-02 . chapter 1
I love this song!! I read this a while ago, and had to listen to the song. And I found that I loved it. This is so well written and its a wonderful story.
PetPetAngel 2004-10-07 . chapter 1
Oh my God! Once again, one of the best stories I read! Your so good at your write! It's just, oh my God! It's so good! And in the end, I was laughing! It was just so funny! First, an abuse fiction, then a fight with RICEBALLS! It's just so DAMN funny! LOL! No seriously, it WAS funny. And I qoute:

Bakura was still sat on the floor... and he was smiling. He was actually staring at the splodge of rice and smiling."

So

Damn

Funny!

Thanks a lot! You inproved my mood.

*~*~*~*~ PetPetAngel *~*~*~*~
Ril 2004-03-06 . chapter 1
Really cool, I like how you did that! Deffinatly write more like it!
Neko-chan -Silvered Tongue- 2004-01-25 . chapter 1
*glares darkly at her finals* So, yes. Now you know where I've been. I am SO sorry for taking so long to review this, Baz. Finals just came up and swallowed me whole. x_x;;
Anyway--I can't believe you said that this story was for me! I don't deserve such a well-written piece of fanfiction. *hugs* The element of the story just seemed to flow into each other; one thing became another and just... simply wonderful. The story was amazing and well-thought out and just... such a treasure to read. Thank you so much, Baz. *glomps*
Oh, and I think your readers are right--you've gotten me beat in the psychological genre. XDXDXD
Excellent job, Baz. =^^= *hugs*
~Neko-chan
Dark-AmethystUnicorn 2004-01-13 . chapter 1
*deep breath* KAWAI!! lol so cute! But with loads of good points about change which obviously was the intended main theme *shrugeth* I know, i know, i point out the obvious, U_U; it's a bit of a bad personal habit methinks. *huggles* Ja mata! *grins* I will be back on msn more often soon, school starts up in two weeks and i need something to do in the mornings, lol
Darkened Soul1 2004-01-12 . chapter 1
Wow, it's amazing that you whipped up such a great story without any previous thought. It had amazing depth despite the fact that it's a one-shot and I liked the message it conveyed, that all people change but changes aren't always negative. I thoroughly enjoyed that piece and I look forward to other fictions by you. ^_^
ObiWanGirl 2004-01-11 . chapter 1
*sighs* Why must you be such a good author?! -_- I was tearing up during the middle and giggling my head off durring the end. Meh, either way, loved the ficcy, (then again, love all your ficcies), and now I'm off to read the update to FD!
Ja
Tiffany
Goku-Benji 2004-01-10 . chapter 1
I found it not only revealing to the way you think Bazz but also I found it relatable to myself, it was shibbily written [good thing] and it touched me in the way that we all feel neglect sometime, we all picture ourselves in different circumstances, and we all wish we could make a change. Keep going with this story if you can find more of the nitty gritty within you and I'll be the devoted Reviewer I always have been >.
Shizu the Leprechaun 2004-01-09 . chapter 1
Adrienne: I've seen you before, but I can't remember where...
Yami: ...
Adrienne: Anyway, I liked this and almost kicked Bakura when he was insulting Ryou like that! But, in the end, everything worked.
Yami Bakura: Yay, I've become Mr. Softy.
Adrienne: *lol* Yep! Because you're just so cute that way!
Yami Bakura: I am not!
Adrienne: Will this remain a one shot, or will it be a fic?
Chibizoo 2004-01-09 . chapter 1
X) A cute little fluff fic - quite enjoyable and the lyrics provide a nice break from each vignette-like snippet.
Keep up the good work~ Twas an enjoyable read!
crystalphoenix3 2004-01-09 . chapter 1
This fic is just awesome! I can't believe how much of an emotional roller coaster I was on. It was a whole new spin on this type of fic, one that I'm a fan of. :) Write another one!
silver_fox20 2004-01-09 . chapter 1
Great one-shot! It got me thinking. This was very inspirational and touching!
Good Story
LinaPhoenixLP 2004-01-09 . chapter 1
Dude, I loved the sumary to this! It reminded me of Zelda; Ocarina of Time for N64 when Shiek greets Link at the Sand Temple. I love your writing style, sweetness. ^^ Peace, l8ter
ChocolateEclar 2004-01-09 . chapter 1
Hmm, I like the words in italics. Are they lyrics from a song? If so, I'm curious as to which song.
Anyway, I enjoyed this. The overall plot was cool and the bit at the end was sort of...cute. *laughs* Rice fight anyone? ^_-
Bye! ^_^
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