Such a spoiler! You should have warned! I hadn't got hold of Tehanu yet! :C

I liked that you put the story into your poem.
It got my attention and that's not easy to do.
Best of all, I haven't read one like it.
It needs some improvement but overall its a good poem!

Queen of the Dragons: Hey! I can summarize 'The Tombs of Atuan' and 'Tehanu', make arbitrary line breaks, and call it a poem! Yay me!
(Clotho): No. No, you can't.

Needs some improvement. But its allright.

Perhaps you'd prefer to post on "The Earthsea Trilogy" room- I'm sure there you'll find more potential readers. Good luck :)

didn't really understand it although I have read both books...hm

its interesting and i mean hey, it caught my attention right off the bat!

it was nice

I really like how you put the story into a poem. You should make it a ballad.

Cool, it'd probly by cooler if I had any idea what this is about.

I really enjoyed that.
It fills a gap after the book.

Nicely done. *Thinks* Which book was this from in the series (number)? I think it may have been the only one I didn't read...Well written, well formed, and it really wood make a good prolouge for a story.
~Sharone aka Kami

All right! I always love a bit of Earthsea poetry. Or Earthsea anything, really. . .I don't know if you noticed, but there's another Earthsea section under "Earthsea Trilogy". I'm not sure what's going on with the two sections, but it could get a bit confusing. Are you going to write more? Please?