Oo, something based off the pearl saga ^-^ Not seen something done so before. Sounds like an idea I had once with a character of mine - Nith Unauna. Nicely done, hope you write more

I would really like to know what happens next. I havn't read the book, so I don't know the characters, but that just makes me less likely to guess what will happen. Please write more!

Okay, that's intristing. I think.