This a good story.. you should continue it.

It's been a long time since I last read this, so I was very happy to see this updated. There simply isn't enough fanfiction about draconians.
Another good draconian story here in Fanfiction.net is Draconians in modern times by Umi Mikazuki. Have you read it?
It is a bit different than most other draconian stories, but that makes it so good. But because it hasn't been updated for a long time, I'm starting to lose my patience with it.
Don't you make the same mistake, the last thing any author would want, is an angry mob outside their front door. =)
I think I'll register a pen name for myself, so that I can make signed reviews. Yeah, that's what I'll do next. I think I'll use the name Beekiller-Johanna from Finland, I've used that name on the internet before, so my friends will know who I am...

I have always felt sorry for draconians because they were replaced by dragon spawn, so I like the way the story is going.

Laurana, the Golden general you mention died at the hands of Berylinthranox at the end of Dragons of a Lost Star. I will keep checking back to see if it is some kind of twist but I just thought I should alert you of this error.

It was short but pretty rad, even though I've never played Dragonlance (or read any Dragonlance stories). At first I thought you were talking about the Aurochs in Final Fantasy X or something, but I think I get it now. Anyways, keep on writin' and stuffs!

I really like the story. I can see how it reflects your views of a "pitiful human army". Write what happens next!

This looks promising. I think you should continue writing it.

Good description, enjoyable story.