This was a really cute story. There were a few spelling errors here and there, but nothing a little re-reading wouldn't catch in the future. ^_^ Great job on this.

This is really good. I'm interested to read the rest of it. I especially love Tempest's spunky character. Good job. ^_^

MORE...what happerns in the dare...this is a brill story...

...urm...yeah...wierd..but good

Poor migu...he is really nice...

no squee for this chapter

SQUE

(thats the thing i do when i love something)

SQUE
yey ROCK on

[b]Aw...poor Tempest! Hang in there! I like all the dialogue in this story, it reads faster![/b]

[b]Aww...that was a sweet ending! Yay for Celena! Dilandau would make one sexy father! lmfao!![/b]

hey! this is VERY GOOD!
keep writting

Aww! that was such a sweet, happy ending!

THat was great, I've been waiting on you to finish. GO you!!

MY GOD!! I wasnt expecting you to end it so soon... :( well i like the ending anyway! hehehe i hope i could write soon too... i have so many things to do (in school) HOPE TO SEE U SOON ON YOUR NEXT STORY!

:D that was so adorable! yay! andrea is gone! whoot whoot!

best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming

YEY! It is finished... hang on... finished? ;_; NO! Great ending, loved it all!! Will you write a sequel? *Hides behind the door incase she said something bad*