|Reviews for After the Dawn: The Philosopher's Stone|
| Me 3/21/13 . chapter 31
I enjoyed your stories immensely, but that end is cop out crap. If you're bored and don't want to finish just say so, not mush it all into some go him bs ending
| Thane of Hyrule 2/27/13 . chapter 8
In the scene where filch almost catches them, you wrote, along the lunes of, neville back into sirius the black dog. Should it have read ardeio(sp?) The giant red setter?
| Byakugan789 1/21/13 . chapter 1
Ebony? AU, so I guess it works. Cannon was Holly. nice meeting Hermione, however briefly.
| Guest 1/8/13 . chapter 31
Awesome but plz write now xx
| jennifer.alston 12/31/12 . chapter 31
Great story, one of the best Fanfictions I've ever read, and followed through to the end.
| Guest 7/9/12 . chapter 15
Blaise is a boy.
| Athena's-Dragon-138 1/6/12 . chapter 31
I loved this series! I'm SOOO sad that you arn't going to write any more of it... :(
| DarianRaine606 1/4/12 . chapter 1
I really like your stories, you're an amazing author. But Why no Hedwig? I was sad when i saw you gave Harry a different Owl...And his wand was Holly and Pheonix feather...But i suppose you have a reason for changing that, anywho! Excellent work so far! I look forward to when i have more time to read another chapter!
| TartanBoy10 11/29/11 . chapter 21
"Oh, alright, s'pose you wanna cum in then?" Hagrid sounded a little nervous.
| vampiremuggle 8/9/11 . chapter 31
I take it this last chapter means that you are not going to continue the story further? I wish you would, although this last chapter does bring everything to a close quite nicely. This story (and it's prequel) are completely and utterly amazing. I love the way they are written and the way you developed the characters is quite realistic. Awesome job. I do wish you would write one more chapter - with Dumbledore and the rest of the teachers finding out that Nemo Protectium is in fact Harry Potter. That would be quite the fun chapter to read. Anyway, amazing stories - I loved them!
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| David-El 7/31/11 . chapter 31
So, what, does that mean this series is over? What happens during the Tri-Wizard Tournament? Does Hogwarts ever find out that Nemo is actually Harry? What happens to Riddle?
| David-El 7/30/11 . chapter 3
You said that you don't understand the significance of the wood? Well, here's the significance according to another writer. For Harry's canon wand- Holly:It favors those who are capable and observant. The owners of such wands tend to have an affinity for animals and travel. Like wands made of Birch wood, wands made of Holly wood are able to produce a powerful Patronus. It is one of the most powerful wand types known. If the owner has strong magical powers, such wands also work well in wand duels and wand battles. Personality:exuberant, powerful, talented, competitive, headstrong, valiant and are born leaders.
Your version of his wand-Ebony:Favors those who are protective, ambitious and have very powerful magical abilities. The wielders of such wands are often highly ambitious and are willing to jump into the fray of any battle or duel whenever need be. Ebony wood is the most famous of all the Dark woods. Though Ebony wands are only the second most powerful type of wand in existence next to Elder wands, they are certainly the most magical of all the wand types. Thus, someone with high magical potential or with high magical abilities will tend to have such a wand. For visual impact and power overall, this type of wand is among the best.
| mattymo153 7/1/11 . chapter 1
booooo! no hedwig? :(
| queen-of-the-libary-and-light 6/21/11 . chapter 1
really good, but harry's wandis holly and pheonix feather
| NARUHAREM FOREVA 11/25/10 . chapter 31
wow, who would have figured that the 2 stories so far were actually a book that harry wrote...GENIUS! brilliant idea mate, brilliant!