"It's not wrong to want to be loved...It's when you settle for being wanted that you get into trouble"

You had me with that line. Very nice fic. Balances romance, angst and humor very well with equal amounts of good charachterization.

HILARIOUS! _

(Hakkai's so perceptive!) hahahah!

he he ... this amuses me

you do well with the scenes... but their whereabouts seemed hazed at times, which I guess works since Gojyo's kinda drunk. lol. dry humping... sounds like one of my friends -

"Trip, baby, and I'll do you in the hallway."

Hoo boy. AWESOME. Teehee. xD

Can't type...mind still focused on Gojyo's tongue in Hakkai's ear..

". . .sweet like unripe peaches and just as soft."

This is a play on words, right? Because unripe peaches are neither sweet nor soft.

Just one of my favorite lines . . . ever. From any story I've read before. You rule!

Stupid Gojyo. He should know he never can fool Hakkai. But it was a nice try, and the result better than he had hoped for.

It's always a pleasure to read your fics, they are always well written, and the characters are always IC.

_ I lurv your ficcehs. I really do.

Okay! That's what I'm talking about! We're getting a little closer here, but I think you can push that "R" rating a little further! Whoo! Smiles!

This is VERY cute! :) Hakkai and Gojyo were wonderful together, and wonderfully in character! :) Thanks for portraying them so nicely in this fic! Loved it!

Very amusing. I very much enjoyed it. Very cute as well. *chuckles* Found myself laughing throughout the whole thing.
Eln

Trip, baby, and I'll do you in the hallway
That was one of the best lines in the whole story. Hakkai being 'dry-hump'ed was pretty far up there, too. This was an excellant foray into the the mind that is Sha Gojyo; I could almost expect this to be canon. -! Great job!

::snort::
indeed
Zek

I couldn't leave your page without commenting on this story, too. This is a lovely and amusing 58 piece, quite errotic without the least bit of crassness or even overt sex. Great job getting across the complex relationship of a close friendship hesitantly growing into an atypical romance .
I'm not sure why you rated it R. In the absence of explicit sex and serious violence, it could easily be PG-13, and it might then have the benefit of an even wider readership. Either way, kudos on a well-written story.

thank you for a fic in which hakkai is totally deliciously aware of what gojyo wants! thank you for a fic in which two can play that game!

Gojyo/Hakkai Fluff
This just made me pleasantly happy. Not much else to say. _