once again, people torture me by not finishing their stories! and this one was interesting! these things always happen to me-i find a great story but when i get to the end, i find out that it isn't finished! why me?

I love ur story! Just PLEASE write more! I can't stand the way it ends, lol!

chapt 7 and 6 conflict. get rid of 6, or at least make it a pre-chapter for chapt 7 or something like that. so let me get this straight:

both of them are back in the real world, Rachel is back wherever the animorphs are, and Tobais is in Seattle and he's rying to inherit Microsoft? strange, but good. Continue!

just read your story in one day i love it plz keep writng even thought you havent in a while im hooked plz dont quit on me

Hi! I think the story had a great plot and fantastic authoring. It's a bit confusing, with the Rachel-dying-found-by-ax thing. I thought they were both taken back to the normal Animorph time, but I guess not. Or are they? Sorry, I can't tell! Well, in all I loved it, and if I wasn't so dumb, I'm sure I would have understood the alternate universe.
-I don't wanna do this .*

like it... bit hard to read (all those strange symbols), but I still want you to continue. It's a good story.

What's gonna happen? Will Tobias ever go back? What about Rachel's baby? Update sooN!

Interesting...very interesting... You threw some nice twists there. Here's a random q: chapter seven doesnt have "gate" in it like all the rest...is there a specific reason for this?

Hmmm...interesiting ending. Not what I expected, not what I wanted either...did it even make sense? I have no idea, I read these installments months apart. Well, it was a cool idea. SUpernarf!

You KILLED them! What happened back in the real world? I'm confused!

gahhh! You must finish this!

Oh hey that interesting. Glad to see you picked this up again. PLease do more! This is an oh so cool story.

AAAAHH! NO! THEY CANNOT TAKE TOBIAS! NO! *breathe, breathe* Okay. I'm calm now. Somewhat. You will write the next part. Now.

Cool story! I love it so far!

Huuum, I REALLY love it! Please, go on with the next part soon! When will Tobias find out that Rachel is pregnat?