I think the story is great but you could keep it going make it longer people love longer stories i know i do

i think it's awesome. the you jump, i jump thing is from the movie, Titanic right? i only saw the whole thing once and i almost cried, but you didn't need to know that. keep up the good work. can we expect a sequel or at least another chapter? i hope so.

I loved it! That was really great. . .the transition from anger to grief to love was really smooth. Off to read the sequal.

That was so cute. I really liked the element of loyalty...plus I loved the fluffiness. :)

I loved it when I read it on GrissomandSara.com and I still do. Will you be posting the second part here as well?

I loved this story the first time I read it, and I still love it now!
Will you be posting a revision of the sequel, too?