I like it a lot. i've always got how epic the whole aragorn and arwen thing but always secretly thought that legolas and arwen would be sweet too so it was nice reading this story.

...i think i'm going to cry...

wow... just wow... O.o

I am saddened by the fact that I was not able to read this as it was still in progress. Also, I did not wish for this story to end!
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Seldom do I find stories as great as this. I was hoping for it when I went to read fan fictions in this genre again. I'm not really a "L/A shipper" but this is just...
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It's not too short, it's not too long. The story ended brilliantly. It didn't go on and on until they died but at the right time. For that I am grateful. The story and especially the ending are just wonderful.
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Don't ever stop and God bless!
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Psalm 68:19
Praise be to the Lord, to God our Savior, who daily bears our burdens.
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1 Timothy 4:14
Do not neglect your gift, which was given to you through a prophetic message when the body of elders laid their hands on you.

I forgot to mention one thing concerning your fic. The cousin references between Legolas and Arwen freaked me out. This isn't meant as a subtle jab, but I didn't think they were related (even distantly) and was pleased to see no mention of this on the web, or in family trees. Anyway, seriously, wonderful fic.

Very, very, good. Your wording was rich and the imagination you displayed with the characters impressive, thus, I definitely felt the two of them. I gotta agree with some of your previous readers, I wouldn't mind seeing eventually come back to this in some form, whether you do or not I had to put that out there. Anyway, well done.

Wow, that was cool. Hey, it could happen!

Loved it:):):) the way you made the words were excelent and I really felt apart of the story. You should be proud of what you created in this story:) Please make more stories:)

I really can't say anything else except that that was the most fantastic L/A fic I've ever read. I am completely serious -- you have the most amazing narrating talent that I've come across in LOTR fanfiction to date. You should be very proud to have accomplished something so beautifully written. Tolkien would have been proud. It was excellent.

You really have a way with words. Legola’s trek towards the sunlight as heartache descended upon him was so incredibly vivid. Heck the whole chapter was vivid. I know that I've said this before but you really have a talent for opening the character's souls to the reader. I mean the language was just wonderful. I especially loved Legola's adoration of Arwen's name and the proclamation about love and hope at the end of the chapter - Beautiful.
I really enjoyed this story and hope that you will post more glimpses into A/L in the future.

Oh no, it's over! That was just beautiful, but I can't say I'm not sorry it's over. I'll definitely be looking forward to your next fic!

What, it's done? What do I have to look forward to now? Maybe I'll actually have to get around to writing some fanfic ideas I've had and vacuuming those plot bunnies in my brain. But yeah, a happy ending! I'm a sucker for happy endings. After sniffling through it so much already I deserved a smile. Happy, happy, happy! Hugs all around. I'm always glad to find romance that isn't completely drowning in syruppy sweetness.
And I don't even have any picky grammar complaints! Write more, write soon, and write well (not that I need to tell you that!).
I'd read your parody and any more Legolas or whoever fanfics you write (hint hint).

Ohh my gosh! That was so beautiful! Not only did it read greatly, it was literaryly (If thats a word) beautiful as well. I don't know if you ment to do this, but it was SO awesome I had to inform you in what you did if you didn't know you did it, or compliment you if you were knowledgeable, or both. Your parallel of Legolas walking towards the light out of the dark with Arwen following him, symbolising Arwen coming from the dark and into the light was brilliant. I know I just wrote that really confusingly, but it was just so awesome. I loved it! The whole story was just beautiful as a whole. I really enjoyed reading it, and I'm sad its over. I can't wait to read your next story ;) Yeah, I would deffinatly read the parody. WOW this story was just so good; i'm so glad I found it! Great Job!
~LOVE~
Tiffiany Hargis
Sam: How do you become something you're not?
George: What do you want to become?
Sam: What I'm not.
George: What are you now?
Sam: I'm nothing.
~Life as a House
"Have you ever met a woman who inspires you to love? Until your every sense is filled with her... you inhale her... you taste her... you see your unborn children in her eyes and know that your heart has at last found a home. Your life begins with her, and without her, it must surely end."
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There are four questions of value in life... What is sacred? Of what is the spirit made? What is worth living for, and what is worth dying for? The answer to each is the same. Only love.
Don Juan Demarco

Goody! You updated! Aw! So there isn't going to be another chapter? Aw! Brill story! I couldn't have done better myself. I hope you get lots of reviews! ele15greenleaf

Beautiful Chapter!!
I'm so glad Arwen has finally overcome her grief. Now if only she can catch Legolas. You managed to write Aragon wonderfully. It didn't seem forced at all. I never pictured him as one who was wordy, therefore the quite soulfulness(with only a few words to make his point)in your writing of Aragon fell right in line with how I've always imagined him.
Again, solid writing. Can't wait for the final chapter!