Meh, it was alright, it's just that a few things bugged me. The whole rape scene was a little bothersome, sorry. I wasn't impressed. As for the random Japanese you've put in here, not only is it completely unnecessary in the story, some of it's it's /wrong/. Tadaima is only used in response to Okarinasai. Also, when Yamato refers to his father as 'tousan/Otousan, he's really referring it to someone else's father. There's more, but I'll leave it at that. Just make sure your wording is accurate before someone that has a sister that /speaks/ Japanese reads your story. :)

good story so far

wow...that was intense and kept me hooked the whole time i was reading...awesome

SO GOOD! _ ALL of your stories are. I can't stop reading them!

Poor Yama. I'm glad they were all okay in the end, though. WEll, save his uncle. I'm glad he's dead.

O_o WHOA!

so sad..

brought tears to my eyes

could have done with more Yama/Taichi action here and there...

i know i'm a perv but what else does a 14yrs 9mos and 7dys year old? have to do when boredom strikes in the wee hours of the morning but read incredibly kinky fanfictions..

*innocent giggle*

Seriously, it didnt make ANY SENSE!

there were a million things that you could just DOUBT about it, i mean honestly, it was way OOC and did it even have a plot?

I liked the first few chapters that you wrote.. but after around chapter 5.. it just went down hill for me.

I don't like the idea of Yamato being all helpless when it came to having Takeru being threatened with his life. I mean.. Yamato would have done everything in his power to prevent his brother from getting hurt. He would have fought his uncle..

In chapter six.. just made no sense to me. When he was at Taichi's house after the rape incident, why didn't they just call Takeru to stay at Taichi's place as well and called the cops on his uncle.. or better yet, have the whole gang hunt his uncle down, curve out his eyes with a rusty spoon and shove a six foot cactus up his ass while crushing his testicles with a sludge hammer...

Sorry for my weird.. review but i did like the first three, four chapters.

I didnt usually bother with these things but i jus had to tell you THAT WAS THE BEST FANFIC I HAD EVER READ. Not trying to sound sappy but that actually brought tears to my eyes. You are amazing at this and i sure hope u will conitinue to write masterpieces like these. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story.

Kick Ass. I started this story at like 11:30 Pm and it is now 2:33 AM so, I, am extremely tired, but it was worth it! I;d do it again! your;e story was just so god! I have the feeling that I've read it before too... hm. who cares, If I have, it was good enough to be read again! yay! it's just so ... yummy! -_-U "yummy"? wow, I MUST be tired if I'm using words like "Yummy" well, I'm going to bed now. Good night excellent wonderful lovely author

-Autum

this is a great story. keep writing stories like this pleaes

Hi. I'm review for chapter eighth (since FFNet forbid me to review for it since I'll already review for your first part of epilogue. _

*showers butterflie with chocolate & roses* *claps loudly* that was AMAZING! you are an amazing writer... wow. i know i could never come CLOSE to writing anything like that. *shakes head in amazement and awe* anyone who hasn't read & reviewed this story is insane.
*nEo

excelent story! i loved the way you ended it! please write another soon! you're too good of a writer not to!

x_x You need to finish that epilogue soon. I'm itching to know what happens.

Finally! I'm glad that you updated it even for a little bit. I hope you could work on your school problems. Ah, I'm glad that Takeru is still alive for now (don't know what plan do you have with him. _). Hmm, I don't think Yamato would gets punish for killed his uncle. I mean, the people that saved him that day could give testify that he was badly hurted and was raped savagely by the look of his wounds! Well, I hope I could read the complete epilogue soon. Uhm, just one thing. Maybe you could post it as a new chapter? I'm afraid if you replace this chapter, FFNet would rejects anyone who already review for this chapter to review later for the complete epilogue.