Hey !

I'm a french fanfiction reader and i'm trying to translate your "Catching Up" for a friend of mine, 'cause she doesn't talk english at all but she loves Everworld and the ChrisXJalil.

What i wanted to ask was : may i post the translation on when it will be over ?

Of course, with the "I DONT OWN THIS ONE IM ONLY THE TRANSLATOR" thing... anyway.

I just loved that fic... but i think i'll still prefer it in english, even when it will be translated.

Of course, because originals versions are always better !

To bad for my friend...

seeya

Right, I know this is an old fic, but hopefully this will reach you, author.

This was really good. I had great fun reading it, and the chars were mostly IC too IMO.

So good job

Ah! That was so great!I absolutely love it! Fantastic job! Keep it up please!

D&S

Well, this is old, but I'm going to put it in my faves so I can read it over and over again, and I'd feel bad to do so without reviewing.

To be short, 'cause your older reviews already said most of what I think : Jalil's slowly taking in everything, Everworld- and realworld-wise : totally believable and exactly in his logical, analytical way ; the Coke : aow ; his freaking out in the bathroom : totally him ; Christopher finding him and accepting him : made me want to kiss him too for being so damn sweet ; Jalil's relief : aww ; make-out part : friggin hot ; Jalil waking up : frustrating yet hilarious ; Chris coming in moment later and saying when exactly he woke up : I'm still snickering ; Jalil shoving him off : even more snickering.

(in the end, this isn't short at all, but oh, crap.) So this is sweet, hot, funny, and most of all, completely in character and damn -believable-. Love every bit of it.

Ha, that's one of the better slash fics that I've read! Heck, one of the better fics, period, not just in the slash genre. Great characterisation, gret description - and rather sensual too! _

oh! it's so sweet! i love it. _ udate this story soon

Wow. That was really great! C/J... great slash, wonderful choice. I sound like I'm a salesman or something of the like.
Ah, well.
-mi

...slash. A slash fic. A really good slash fic. AH! This never happens! This is amazing, exciting, mind boggling. And on top of that, the writing and characterization are both well done. You draw your scenes nicely, and the emotions are believeable.
This is so cool. Soon there shall be enough Everworld slash to take over the planet! I suppose I should thank you for contrinbuting to our global domination. _;
Er... anyway. Good show. Any chance at some more?

*dies* I know I demanded everyone start posting EW slash, but if I'd known how envious I was going to be that everyone writes better than me... wow. XD Heh heh.
That was *amazing*. I have no words. It was incredibly in-character, your Jalil is absolutely perfect, and the way Christopher and him interact is flawlessly done. An interesting story, a great idea, and most of all, some damn fine slash. Because gods... it was good.
I worship you now. *bows* Dude, I worship SO much. The part with the Coke, and when Christopher catches him in the bathroom and accepts him? That was gorgeous. And perfect. And awesome. And I worship you so much now. You write Jalil's disease right on the spot, exactly how it is, and managed to fit in into the story with a grace that not everyone can manage.
And the making out? All I'm sayin'? *whines* NO! Why did you wake him up, you stupid Greek bimbo! GAH! I about fell on my face. *laughs* Brilliant. But so unfair. I know how Jalil feels...
Most of all? I adore the Christopher and Jalil interactions. Every word they say, every touch, every joke and personality quirk, was exactly on. I'm jealous. Gods, that was good. More... *whimpers* Please? Write another! I'll do anything! Yes. Very good.