 L. Damarik Laizare 7/26/05 . chapter 16I just sat here and read this from Section 1 to 16, non-stop. I must say, that even for a friendship pairing such as an Andalite and a Yeerk, you managed to pull it off nicely. Slight, subtle hints here and there. And even hints at a possible romance from Ana herself.
That was what kept me reading. I'd never before encountered anything like this. And of course, I'll be keeping an eye on this story from here on in. It was very well designed, and by all means, left me wanting more. But is that simple human desire? There's a topic for Ax and Aurana to debate next time they get the chance.
Aside from a few spelling/grammatical errors, this was a damn good read.
So, it is with a heavy mind that I leave this fic, and add it to my alert list, hopefull that you'll update soon. After all, not many stories are able to catch my attention as well as this was.
Good luck to you, and may you be fresh with new ideas every day for your writing.
-Laegreffon Damarius Laizare- |
 Anifan1 12/5/04 . chapter 1Adding this to the Peace Movement community I set up...one thing; if you have tim, can you put breaks between each quote and paragraph? Makes it easier to read. |
 Cythwyn 6/25/04 . chapter 16One word: aw... |
 SilverStar 11/10/02 . chapter 14 aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww! i LOVE this story! WHY WON'T YOU CONTINUE? WHY? PLEASE! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! _ |
 Xaphacia 5/20/02 . chapter 16 That can NOT be the end, please write more. At least a little more about Ax?
anyway I like the story. |
 Temrash 113 1/22/02 . chapter 16 Sweet. I was hoping that she'd get to remember, though, because it's kind of anticlimactic for everything to come to nothing. But it's realistic, unlike 98% of happily-ever-after stories, so I guess it's better that it ended the way it did. Ch. 15 was my favorite. |
 Tierl 1/9/02 . chapter 16Please continue this story. There are so few Ax romances out there, and this is the best of all! Heck, this is the best animorph story out there. I once considered Applegate the best but she lost that place when she had that increadbly stupid ending to her series. This, however, rocks! MORE |
 You'dNeverGuess 7/15/01 . chapter 16I must have missed it when you updated this chapter. I LOVE THIS STORY! ::gets slightly sappy:: Thank you for writing this! |
 Lenalaye 6/13/01 . chapter 16Is it over? Waaaaaa! I really liked this, very interesting story ( and romance!). Great story, Narfarific! |
 Ruby 6/11/01 . chapter 16I love it! |
 You'dNeverGuess 5/1/01 . chapter 15Wonderful! I can't wait for this amazing creation of yours to continue! |
 Anifan1 4/30/01 . chapter 15 Awww! :) Aurana and Ax sittin' in a tree. :) |
 Black Jade 4/29/01 . chapter 15Umm...I wrote a REEEALLY long review of about 25 lines, but what the heck, for some reason ff.net didn't accept it. I feel kinda deflated now...so I guess all I say is that I LOVE YOUR FIC. And Aurana is a wonderful character. I wish she was an original one *sigh*. Also, you managed to write the whole fic without Ax being OOC (Out of Character, in case you didn't know), which is brilliant. Ax is still his lovable, high-and-mighty self, and am I glad that he is. The story would be totally unrealistic if he went all soft-and-sappy. Also, the romance between them is developing fantastically. Not too fast and not too slow. I laso want to comment on your ability to combine angst, action, humor and romance into to one magical combination. I have gotten all obsessed with this story. It's going to be the discussion topic between my circle of friends, who also keep up with your story, for the next few days. |
 You'dNeverGuess 4/25/01 . chapter 14This chapter took so long! I had to re-read some to remember. Anyway, it's very good! Post more soon! |
 Anifan1 4/22/01 . chapter 14I LOVE IT! MORE! |