This is beautiful. Finding Nemo is my most favourite movie in the history of cinema, and you've captured it perfectly. You do Pixar proud! BB

That was such a beautiful novelization of this movie! It was wonderful to see all your personal insites into the characters' minds! I also loved your two intro fish! Wonderful story!

Personally, I'm glad you've given Gill a lot of attention because he is my absolute favorite-test character in the whole universe! And Gurgle is totally awesome! Yay! But, Gill is the awesomnest. I love PIXAR, but screw the dudes who thought of making the fish be stuck in their bags and die. Whatever, Gill will call Nigel then he'll go home and live with Nemo and all that. Well, anyway, great novel!

I love your novelization. I also like how in the chapter"Darla" how you deem gill as nemo`s second father. Keep up the good work!

I totally agreed with you on this one. Marlin was totally awesome in this scene! Taking the lead and every thing. I love Marty, er, I mean, Marlin!

wow! Master Marlin from the Aquamarine Palace! You better watch out kids or Marlin will kick your butts!

GAAHH! I am so like a million years too late in leaving my comments on some FN stories...but this might just be one of the bestest ever because of all your personal interjections and the Dot/JC insanity!! Your writing style may be uber-detailed, and I dunno about anyone else, but I generally tend to *like* that. I'd usually prefer to see an attempt at describing every little thing in a film, than to have parts glazed over, which can annoy my obsessive, perfectionist mind (although of course that's often a very impractical way to be, lol.) XD;; So harr...what have we here? Ah yes, a couple lil' things--Deb's eyes are mauve (wanna call it mauve? It's like that wine-red color that Dory has.) Gurgle's are blue. (Like those of his equally adorable and sexy voice actor Austin Pendleton...eh heh heh hem...yeah.) And 'gramma' has an r in it. Um, thassit.

NO! I don't really mean that's it. x3 'Cuz LAWD, Debbie, you are too right--Gurgle (aka Two-Tone) ish SMEXY indeed!! >3 I LUFF HIM! MUST CUDDLE!! Dot, you do have competition to win his heart. *enter a Mandarinfish by the name of Vivian who WANTS him bad*
Ladies, have at it. (Gurgle, escape now while you still own yourself and are temporarily free of the glomping death hug grip. Bwaa, ha ha.) Ah. I myself be an obsessive (mental patient!) fan of the movie. Saw it twice in the theatre--don't think I've ever done that before, except with one Harry Potter film.

If I were a (polygamist) fish I'd wed Gurgle, Bubbles, and Gill. XD And Mr. Ray (wonder if there's a Mrs. Ray? In my imagination there is. A Blue-spotted Ribbontail. Reina. LOLZ.) I also have mates for the other three. There's Viv, of course. ^__~ Bubbles' is Britta, a Purple Tang (yes, pronounced like the water filter! ^~) Forget that they naturally live in the Red Sea instead of the Great Barrier Reef. :p Let none of that stuff matter in the movies. And Gill has Nellie (short for Citronella) the Bicolor Angelfish. (Is is teh fishie freak, yes, if it wasn't obvious.) Those guys are hotties! x3 *splodes* Well, for fishes, y'know. Don't hurt that they're voiced by those hot people (especially Austin and Willem Dafoe/Gill!)

Hey Debbie I really like your story of fiding nemo. I think you are a good at storyteller. Keep it up!

loved it a lot^^

Love it! I'm amazed at how you captured the emotion on each of them

To respond to your question about Jacques: The shrimp might be crushed in the filter wheel if he's not careful. Also, he might not get out of the filter quick enough before the dentist came back.

Excellent work Debbie Dai-chan. Kudos from Capital-C.

Great story. I love how you decribed Chum. He is my favorite character. One teensy mistake. Sharks don't have scales, they have denticles. Oh well. We can't all be shark nerds.

I loved this story, even though I've seen the movie a million times! You are a wonderful writer, you've got a great imagination, too! i can't wait to start writing on here as soon as I learn how!!

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I loved this story! It is one of my all time favourties! I am a die-hard Finding Nemo fan anyway, so that made me happier ;). You are an exceptional writer, keep writing, and well done!