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| just smile 33 2008-06-08 ch 15, | abuseloved it a lot^^ |
| Doghanyou3693 2008-01-28 ch 15, | abuseLove it! I'm amazed at how you captured the emotion on each of them |
| Kino Lala 2006-11-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseTo respond to your question about Jacques: The shrimp might be crushed in the filter wheel if he's not careful. Also, he might not get out of the filter quick enough before the dentist came back. |
| Capital-C 2006-08-24 ch 15, | abuseExcellent work Debbie Dai-chan. Kudos from Capital-C. |
| Inverano 2004-06-06 ch 4, | abuseGreat story. I love how you decribed Chum. He is my favorite character. One teensy mistake. Sharks don't have scales, they have denticles. Oh well. We can't all be shark nerds. |
| AlohaFox 2004-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this story, even though I've seen the movie a million times! You are a wonderful writer, you've got a great imagination, too! i can't wait to start writing on here as soon as I learn how!! AlohaFox |
| TPK 2004-05-11 ch 15, | abuseI loved this story! It is one of my all time favourties! I am a die-hard Finding Nemo fan anyway, so that made me happier ;). You are an exceptional writer, keep writing, and well done! |
| Maran Zelde 2004-04-12 ch 15, anon. | abuseAnd so the novelization comes to a close. Aside from some grammatical errors, you did a wonderful job. I almost cried at the "Goodbye Dory" scene the first couple of times I saw it. But that's saying a lot because I hardly ever cry at movies. I loved this part: "If you would be quiet and still, when the ocean is gently billowing, maybe, just maybe you would hear a voice whispering 'Love ya, Dad.' "And maybe, you might hear another voice responding, too. 'I love you, too, son.'" Aw. That's beautiful man. Er, girl. |
| Sa-chan 2004-04-12 ch 15, anon. | abuseHuzzah!! ^^ *smacks self* WHY have I not been reviewing this lately?? Ergh, I'm such a dunce... anyhoo, a great ending to a great fic!! Go you!! *waves a lil flag* Keep writing!! Your style is awesome. I'm behind you all the way!! And so are my muses... even Chet. ^_~ |
| Riverwood 2004-04-09 ch 15, | abuseHaha! *applauds wildly* "Now What?" indeed! I know that last chapters usually sprout incredibly long, detailed, tedious reviews about how much the author has touched the reader to their core, blah blah blah, but I think the devotion of your many fans plus the quality of the fic itself illustrate that very clearly. That, and the fact that I read each new chapter aloud as they were updated. ^^; You are truly an inspiration for writers of all fandoms! *hands a trophy to Debbie, and two fish-sized trophies to Dot and J.C.* We love you, guys! Now all that's left to do is read this fic from chapter 1 straight through... Hmm... *goes downstairs to get some popcorn and root beer* ^__^ |
| melamb 2004-04-09 ch 15, | abuseCongratulations! I loved your story. I can't believe it's over. I've started reading it ever since you started, and now, I'm actually wishing for Finding Nemo 2, or at least somebody to write it! |
| Ivan Alias 2004-04-09 ch 15, anon. | abuseHaven't heard from me in a long while ma'am, and the chances of you reading this are slim to say the least, but nevertheless, I shall write my final review of this fanfiction. It is good. I leave thee, sir-ma'am, with a quote, as per regulations in my reviews: "Love, is all my crippled soul will ever need." Love is All The Rapture Ivan. |
| morph 2004-04-08 ch 15, | abuseAw! It's over! Well, I must say that you have done a simply wonderful job writing this story. Each time I read it it's like I've been dunked back into the movie for real. You've really captured the essence and heart of the story and the characters. Good luck in the furtue, Debbie! :D And now, in the words of one very old and very cool sea turtle, *YOU SO TOTALLY ROCK, DUDE!!* :D:) |
| Terra Nova 2004-04-08 ch 15, anon. | abuseBrillent. Simply brillent. |
| Ruby 2004-04-05 ch 13, anon. | abuseGreat chapter, Debbie! I don't like Darla, either. Just the sight of her makes me get the creeps and shivers all over. That 8-year-old's braces look pretty scary-looking to me. I've got braces on and I look beautiful wearing them. Anyways, just keep writing, just keep writing. Just keep writing, writing, writing. What do we do? We write, write. |