I'm probably going to hell for reading this xD. But dayumm, this was a well written, awesome-tastical storehh!! I think your amazing, and I also want your autograph. =3=

You know, I've read this story once a long time ago, and I'm so glad I found it again. It's lovely and endearing, and I always read it with a smile.

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Sweet!

Aw, so sweet! This is definitely one of the best "Fruits Basket" stories! *fav* ^-^

oh, my god...you are SUCH an amazing writer, it's not even funny...so inspiring, it just instantly CAPTURED my attention...so, so beautiful. what is a true writer like you doing on this lil' 'ol site? eh? (can i have your autograph? :D)

so. fluffy.
*happy sigh*
and yet they were so in character! you did a great job writing this, and i am definitely putting it on my favorites!

I didn't read this version, I read the whole version better, really well written I like it! I love all of the guys in Fruits basket but I think Kyo is my favorite hehe.

Very cute T/K fic, loved it!I had read this before and only now am I writing a review. The interaction between Tohru and Kyo was perfect and so very believable...awesome work in capturing their characters! I always like it best when they are married...and it was nice that Yuki was there, if only to make Kyo jealous and moody ^_^ Great job!

Oh my... I never read anything so beautiful and ...sensual.. and innocent all in one shortened down story before! wow..that's writting...haha ...and exactly how I think I would imagine both Kyo and Tohru when put together in such a passionate situation...I love how the story didn't just JUMP into the ...well...'you know' parts either...it was set in a future tense and not some bizzare one at that either...there was still the old kind of feelings between yuku-tohru-kyo there and then there were the new feelings that were brought between kyo and tohru...wow...really very good.

Very beautiful!

that was very beautiful

THIS SHOULD BE MADE A ONE SHOT! Cuz it's a great one! I LUVIT!! how come it's not "complete"?

Aw that was the sweetest Kyoru fic i've ever read! wonderful job!

This is such a sweet story! ^__^