ooh ooh! please continue this, its good!

I'm confused...people reveiwed on three chapters but there's only one! Ok...anyway...this was hilarious! No one mentioned how funny this is...the dialogue what priceless...I almost thought this to be a spoof or comedy...I think you're in the wrong section...move over to say humor/action/adventure. That is if you haven't given up on this story. But I think you have. Oh well...I had a good laugh.

wow!um i like it but one question...HOW LONG DO YOU TAKE TO UPDATE PLEASE TELL ME WHEN U DO!!

This seems to be very interesting! please update soon
Gippal should feel guilty he didnt have to say it like that at all he was kinda bluntly mean. Will this be R/G T/Y P/B?

sorry i'm too lazy to sign in..anyway great story..i can see a plot growing..update soon !! ^_^

Hey...i like this story...^_^ plz oh plz update

hey i thought it was a really good story keep up the good work

Uh... why do you keep writing those stories without update? And the bad thing is they are all so good, too... It's like wasted... Honestly, I think if you tie every fanfic you wrote about FFX-2 together you would have a masterpeice. I love your short paragraphs of unwritten memories... but anyway, continue this plz?

aw that was sad people are just so mean well good chapter keep up the good work ^_^

It's a great plot you've got going there. The biggest problem is this fic is your grammar. You switch from past to present, and I strongly suggest past. But otherwise, keep up the great work! Oh, and more of Tidus & Yuna, I don't think you've wrote enough of it...show more of the love between them. Otherwise, a GRAND story and original too! Please update soon!

hey, great^^ i dont wanna spoil anything but i think i know what the favour is.
hey can you pls have more Tidus & Yuna scenes^^

it's a good stuff... more Tidus please?

Oh. The drama. I can't help but wonder what that favor was, though...

So far so good. Your 3rd chapter has a lot of tense shifts that just disrupted the continuity of the whole thing. (Tense shifts as in, one minute ur in the present, then ur in the past, ouch! A headache!) ^_^ Um, anyway, ur still spinning the mystery the right way (I am intrigued...for lack of a better word...) and I can't wait to find out what Tidus is up to! Update, update!

aw! KAIWAII! ^.~ KUGW!(keep up the good work!) and update soon!
azn~*~*~