Very nice. It had a good pace and it was written very well. My only complain would be that you never did explained how Wolfwood came back to live.
However, I am happy he did.
Good job.

WAHH! you made me cry, this was so sad!

Very nice! Poor Knives though...*sniff* I love him...*sniff*

OMGTHATWASSOSWET...xD!

knives...I-I..he died...this is the first story I ever cried over...I can't belive he's gone...NO!!

Sad *sob* like the story continue

aw, this was so sweet! Congratulations on finishing your story! It was a pleasure to read. :)
~P

YAY! SO KAWAII! Do you know how surprised I was when I saw your name in my inbox?! I mean, WOAH! I was excited. I'd have to say this is a much better ending than I could have ever imagined. Good job!

That was deploribly adorable. Absolutly cute. (nasty grin)

Well, I must agree with Nicky. Knives did love Vash, he just had some control issues. He loved Vash mroe then anythign in the world, it made hium angry he couldnt' control him because that was the only way he knew to protect Vash was to control him. I remember the episode 'Rem Savrem' focusing on the SEEDS ship. He went out of his way to do so much just to make things better forhim adn Vash, his entire perception of humans came from those individuals. And no amount of Rem's could have changed that one solitary human that just shaped Knives image them. OR us, however you look at it. I cna't rememebr his name, but he was a very irritating malcontent.
Anyway, I really like how yu portrayed the characters at the end here, it waz very realiistic. Though I must say oen thing. Just beofre Nicky died in the show he admited that Vash was right. There could have been another way. And then he decided that it was true. There ~is~ always another way, you just have to find it. He didnt' have to kill Knives, Knives was bleeding to death, reachng out to his brother. Knives coulda slipped off into peaceful slumber, never to awake again after grasping Vash the way he had tried to do, with as much blood as he had already lost there wasnt' anythign he coudl have done in a malicious way. He wa stoo weak.
But other then that I have to say this is one of the best Trigun fics I have read. Thank you for writting it, it's really great.

ohno.
I have tears in my eyes.
you...did it...you did it the way...the way I would have suspected it to happen on the show!
wow.
amazing.
I LUV IT!
Sad, painful, thank you so much for that. It wa swonderful, though Iwould hate to be Nicky when Vash woke up. Man.

Wow. Umm...why do I get the feeling Vash is gonna do soemthing rash?
Well then.
Hey, how ~did~ wolfwood wind up living? Apperatnly you didnt' have him fake his death liek I was originally thinking (my idea for Wolfwood to be alive again had been a clone, but I realized after ahwile that idea woudl never flaot becase the one with the tech woudlhave no personal reason to revive the guy) so what then? Maybe you;'ll explain it at the end, I should jsut keep reading.

Ooh! Bone chilling. I like.
(ignore all my previous ranting, I was beign a real git)

That' sit. I am not reviewing hte next chapter if it isnt' sufficiantly long enough. I guess Fey-chan and Chibi-chibi have me spoiled in the long chapter department.
Oh, well.
Good work though.

YOU FINALY FINISHED THIS FAN FICTION! I'm so happy that I could do a HAPPY HAPPY FUN TIME WOW jig! It seems that everything was resolved in the end...allthough how wolfwood returned was never explained. I loved it anyways! So what is your next large fan fiction going to be hrm?
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