SWEETEST STORY EVER! GOOD JOB! But make up your own stories, write a book even. You have so much potential, please explore the depths of your imagination. I'm very proud of you, but do not waste your time continuing another writer's story. Write your own, sweetheart, and make up your own characters. Maybe one day your book will make someone else write a fanfic of your story. Great job, fellow writer, and I believe that you can write a better story than J.M. Barrie, so quit leeching off of him.

wow... I really don't know what to say but it was good!:)

This story was utterly gorgeous. It was really sad during the last scene between Peter and Wendy, also during the last scene of Peter and Hook was pretty sad, too, but the story was great. Good job. =)

Made me cry, very well done.

Haunting and beautiful!
Pure poetry.

I like it, it is sad and haunting and I love it. Thats all I can say.

Thought I'd tell you HOW MUCH YOU AND DIS FIC FREAKIN RULE BIRDY-BABE! I know I've said this before at the Cove, but er...you might have forgotten...*shrugs*

I really adore all of your Pan fictions. I have never seen the PP and the P show, but I can still imagine the characters and their personalities from any of the other books and shows I've read. I love the way you bring that harsh reality to the usually blissful fantasy realm of Neverland, and the way you delve into Hook's mind and his obsessive insanity.. the way he has no remorse at times, and the way his emotions get the better of him. Though he remains the 'bad guy', I still feel pity and sympathy for the fellow. You create pan as a wonderful foil character, and he stands for everything Peter Pan has the right to be, the youth, the rogueishness, the innocence, and wild and free spirit. Yeah. Now I'm rambling, but either way, I love the way you can create new tangents and explore the characters from a different viewpoint in numerous different scenarios. I applaud your talent and your work, and can only hope you continue to bless the fandom with your exquisite writitng!

Wow. That was excellent. Really heartrending (sp?). Great job!

Very well done! *claps and bows* That definately was one of the best Peter Pan fictions I have read in a long long time. Thank you for your talent and this wonderful tragic story. Again thank you!

Good chapter.I enjoyed reading this fic.Ja.

OMG Holy crap that was amazing! That was so deep and powerful! I was basically crying throughout that entire thing. This is going to be one of those fics that has me in this thinking/depression mood all week. That was astounding and extremely powerful and sad! OMG wow, I am so shocked. My mouth is just hanging open and I am surprised that I am able to string two words together just to write this review. OMG that was amazing. YOu are an amazing author and I can't wait to see more Peter Pan fics! Wow that was amazing. This can't go in my ff.net favorites because I have no more room, but I am making it a favorite on my puter! (something I never do) that was simply amazing. Wow, I am so shocked. Just wow. I am speechless. Keep up the amazing excellent writing!
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This is a wonderful story! I'm just seriously in tears!
I've ready all of your stories and I think you are one of the most talented writers on the Net. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

i love this story. it's so...fascinating. and interesting...and most definately deep. i love it. you are a phenomonal writer. i wish you luck on your stories that are yet to come.

*cheers and throws confetti around* YAY! Chicky you rule! I read this already on the Cove but I had to review here. ^_^ Mwahaha.