i am totally a jess and rory fan. write the next chapter soon!!

oh my gosh this is so sad! u could have her become pregnant... and then jess come back to a baby in her arms... yah i am good... hehe
~McKenzie

Hi I just wanted to say: I love your story's. They are really great but...you don't seem to finish them: Without You I'm nothing (you only needed 1 chapter right?)Memento Mori (I'm not quit sure if that was the end...it didn't seem like it) For You To Notice...I'm sure there are more. It's not like I don't like your writing but because I like it so much I hate it that you don't finish them.But please update soon!

Beautiful fiction. wonderful depiction of how they are both feeling and the misunderstandings between them and misinterpretations of unexplained actions. Keep it up.

oh my gosh that was so sad! i am on the verge of crying... that was so sad! but if you are going to do another chapter... do it in Rorys eyes... yah im good... gotta go... eamil me at purifiedpalmtree@yahoo.com
-McKenzie

That was absolutely beautiful! So sad! You were really true to character with Jess. I always imagined him to think that way. This was VERY well written. I liked the detail. I hate it when writers give you nothing to work with. The way you wrote it made it come alive. I could picture everything perfectly. Bravo!
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Depressing. Touching. Raw.
Everything a good RJ goodbye fic should be!
I congratulate you on this amazing piece of work. You have captured everything JUST right. You have done something that is very hard for a writer to do. You have taken characters that your readers know, and put them somewhere we hadn't seen them before. you have allowed us to look at them in a new light, from a different perspective. This fic really got to me, I nearly started to cry!
The only thing i would suggest is sorting out your formatting, if you're using word or microsoft works word processor, save the document as a HTML file, that way all your formatting (paragraphs, fonts, italics etc) will be saved at your story will look as good as it deserves!
Well done, and keep up the writing.
Email me if you feel the need, if you want advice (not that i'll be able to help too much!) or if you want to talk. Or even if you need a beta.
Love
Holly

Hey!
This was such a beautiful and sad chapter. You have amazing wording and I love how you wrote down Jess' thoughts. Excellently done!
Bye, smile :-)

Wow you are really good with really gettin inside Jess' head. IT is so poetic, sad and cute an amazing beginning chapter. Keep going!!

THIS IS POSSIBLY THE BEST FAN FIC I HAVE EVER READ PLEASE CONTINUE. I AM BEGGING YOU PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTNIUE