Reviews for SWKOTOR: Destiny's Pawn Book 3 Tattooine

Reviews For: SWKOTOR: Destiny's Pawn Book 3 Tattooine

Vespera 2008-01-11 ch 7,	abuseVery nice job using the sidestories of the game to deepen the characters. You managed to tackle Bastila's mother, Jagi's hatred for Canderous (as well as the disdain of other Mandalorians), and Mission's brother. Good use of the game's sidestories, and again, you managed to have parallel stories at the same time, keeping Juuhani and Canderous busy with the Mandalorians while Kairi continued the main quest, and Bastila came to terms with your mother's condition. The stories came together nicely and neatly, and you managed to make excellent progress with Juuhani and Canderous' characters through their warrior bonding. I have to say, you do a solid job with all the characters, but I've really come to enjoy your Canderous. He has a kind of barbaric charm that continues to shine through these progressive installments.
Kendoka Girl 2005-05-08 ch 7,	abuseThese were two exciting chapters. Great touch with Calo on the speeder. The Canderous/Juhani dynamic is very powerful too. Lastly, Bastila and her mother made for a fine conclusion of this book.
Kendoka Girl 2005-05-06 ch 5,	abuseCool, they found Griff. I'm still liking the Canderous plot line here.
Kendoka Girl 2005-05-05 ch 4,	abuseAnother fine chapter with very good dialogue between the characters. Canderous' meeting with Jagi was excellent as was Carth and Mission's conversation. The character development is well paced.
Kendoka Girl 2005-05-02 ch 3,	abuseVery good and very original in the way you handled the plot. I especially liked Juhani and Canderous' interaction and Calo's arrival. Bastila's meeting with Helena was excellent as well.
Kendoka Girl 2005-05-01 ch 2,	abuseGreat writing here. I was particularly impressed by the depth given to Bastila and the interchange between Canderous and Juhani.
Kendoka Girl 2005-04-30 ch 1,	abuseThis is a nice original piece.
K.Bammel 2004-01-24 ch 7,	abuse;_; so sad...LOVE YOUR STORY! MORE PLEASE!
Akasha15 2004-01-12 ch 7,	abuseWonderful continuation. You're portrayal of Bastila, and the overall fleshing out of her relationship with her family, is stunning. Other scenes of note: The already mentioned Carth, Kairi, and the wedding band. Mission's talk with Griff. HK-47 vs the Dark Jedi, as well as the repair scene and a bit of forshadowing about him. Probably my favorite section so far :)
Prima 2004-01-12 ch 7, anon.	abuseI know that said in the PM to me that you were concerned about something but I confess I'm seeing some real strong stuff here...especially regarding physical and emotional touch that I think is down right brilliant. Notables: Carth and Kairi and the wedding band...with her reaching out to physically touch and him closing himself off to her emotionally. Bastilla and Kairi and the discussion over family and friends...Kairi reaches out emotionally and it becomes a physical confrontation. Both scenes (and the others like them...HK47's repair, Mission and Griff, etc) make for some thought provoking reading...and even though the average reader may not pick up on those forces at work, I still think they make this particular section very rich and complex. Nice job!
thenzguy9 2004-01-12 ch 7,	abusethis is a good story and i hope u continue it. i have one question though. Is Jagi made up because i have played (and beaten) the game twice and have never even heard of him? or do u have to have candarous out because i dont use him often?
athenaprime 2004-01-12 ch 7,	abuseAnother powerhouse installment. Well done! Special kudos go to your portrayal of Bastila. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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